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vamos
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2008/06/10 06:43:09 (permalink)

2 new songs

Hi,

I just finished my first 2 songs with sonar and pretty much my first to songs in general.I'm wanna know what you
guys think ,if have been coming way to often to this forum to finish these songs.Some constructive critisisem would be
appreciated.

Thanks.

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    No How
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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 09:21:10 (permalink)
    First off....I really enjoyed both tunes. Very soulful and restrained blues. love it.

    Before the storm had that acoustic guitar coming in and then the song ended...I wanted you to take me further along those lines...that was too cool...MORE.

    Endless blues sounded like bass was a bit muddy (on these speakers anyway) and drums were a bit timid in the mix...i don't think the drums should be louder just more definate. bass seemed to over power everything in this mix.

    Really Nice music.

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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 10:23:03 (permalink)
    Just listened to 'Before The Storm'. I liked. I think you're off to a very good start. Mix-wise ( it'll come along the more you work with it) a little eq'ing to give the guitars a little more seperation & definition in the mix is in order. Nothing to be ashamed of on this.


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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 15:35:32 (permalink)
    Daaaaammnnn Before the storm was just sweet. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I agree with Rick... Continue on with more of the end. Please.

    Then endless blues was also too short!

    The experiment was cool. Keep on with that one as well.

    You know, when Larry (Lhansen) and others post their songs, I tend to want to just give up cuz I feel like I will never reach that level of skill. You have joined that group... thanks for shredding my confidence!!! (Just kidding, I find it inspiring)

    Sorry, I loved these songs too much to critique the mix. It could sound like it was in a tin can and I would still love it.

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    vamos
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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 16:48:33 (permalink)
    Thanks every one i really appreciate your comments ,i always do wonder if im the only one who likes it.
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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 17:57:12 (permalink)
    They are pure. Simple, filled with your feel. You're off to a fantastic start.
    I looked forward to hearing more.

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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 19:01:22 (permalink)
    Vamos, I really liked the intro on the endless blues. I love the blues, so that second one is my favorite of the two.

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    RE: 2 new songs 2008/06/10 19:10:43 (permalink)
    Vamos,

    I like the spacey atmosperic feel mixed with the blues. Good stuff and a different avenue for the blues.

    Rhyno
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