30 minutes and this is what happened.

Hi John, fun piece, the delay makes the lead sound very spacey, or is it the other way round .
Nice seventies vibe with that riff, nice.

Greetings, Rik

Like the overall groove very much.   Lead does sound a bit over distorted and grainy.

IMO, if you can clean it up and add some good vocals it would probably be a keeper.

Thanks,

thanks everyone for a thumbs up, i'll go ahead and work on this. along with 20 others ha ha

Well yes, It was just a lik and a drum groove I had stuck in my head. So I just bashed this out in less than an hour otherwise the next day the idea is gone. Years gone by it would have been on a $10 cassette rec/player I keep in a drawer. Now it's a full sound cause I can!   As a song goes it has no beginning middle or end. But then there are people who like that a lot. The choice is now mine to go in a thousand different directions,  Now when I write songs I think about playing them live. Be it for a dance or a outdoor festival, they have to be fun to play and energize the audience.
I had just got home from playing at a dance ( as a solo, 200 people) so I was pumped and in dance mode. I also play in a 5 piece band,  when you write for a band it has to be fairly simple to learn= simple arrangements that follow a predictable patterns.