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2014/01/07 14:34:54 (permalink)

'St Mary's Clyffe'

Hi all,
 
Here's the first mix of a new track, 'St Mary's Clyffe' from my 'Weirdstone' project;
 
https://app.box.com/s/h6lflhsxj23ivtlljbmq
 
Once again, many thanks to Ed Kocol (Bapu) for providing bass, everything else by me.
 
Glad to get any comments and suggestions, thanks!

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 15:31:53 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby bapu 2014/01/07 16:19:59
Me likey!  I was sort of drifting away while listening.

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 16:20:30 (permalink)
Fanks agin mayte for letting me loose on Juan of yer songs.
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 16:35:22 (permalink)
Sounds good so far James and Bapu did a nice job on the bass. Being mix #1 I'll wait to see where the next stage of this piece goes before commenting. I do, however, like the sound of the guitar so far. Everything seems to becoming along just fine.
 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 16:46:43 (permalink)
Really liked that!  I kept waiting for "real" drums to kick in (as opposed to brushes or whatever you had laying to mellow groove down)  Maybe an occasional medium snare hit during the chorus of the first part, then when the dirty guitar comes in?  Otherwise super groovy. Awesome clean guitar tones.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 17:04:16 (permalink)
hey james
great moody piece. perfect airy production as ever.
some of the bass/guitar runs seem a bit off tempo from around 2'05. again when the electric guitar comes in, the whole thing is a bit shaky timing wise.
anyhow. love the music.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 17:21:00 (permalink)
Soft & Mellow, drifty but kept interest throughout with evolving instruments and melodic patterns.
 
Like sven said, personally too I wanted some hard drum hits to come out,@2:15 they are too soft I reckon.
 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 17:43:40 (permalink)
A nice, dreamy tune. The bass (?) is sometimes a little off beat, or is it the drums? Otherwise good job on the recording.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 18:33:31 (permalink)
I've listened to a couple of your compositions James and I am very much enjoying your style. Your musical ideas are always interesting, and captivating. Look forward to more of this one.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 21:06:22 (permalink)
It put me in a trance. "literally..." Took me to another place.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 22:13:33 (permalink)
Real nice James. I agree to up the drums in the punchier sections. Yea I know, it's a ton of work to do.
Really nice work.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/07 22:59:55 (permalink)
Very nice.  It sounds like a soundtrack.  Even the Alembic sounded good.  

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 07:35:26 (permalink)
Real purrdeee James! I like it even more when it breaks into the heavier part, then back to soft and relaxing.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 10:42:13 (permalink)
slight rhythmic issues but I loved it nonetheless.  you always have great style.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 11:34:10 (permalink)
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Me likey!  I was sort of drifting away while listening.




Thanks for getting the ball rolling Craig

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 11:35:55 (permalink)
bapu
Fanks agin mayte for letting me loose on Juan of yer songs.




Always a pleasure Ed, never a chore

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 12:07:14 (permalink)
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Sounds good so far James and Bapu did a nice job on the bass. Being mix #1 I'll wait to see where the next stage of this piece goes before commenting. I do, however, like the sound of the guitar so far. Everything seems to becoming along just fine.
 
Peace and Blessings, John




Thanks John!

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 13:33:48 (permalink)
Very nice chords and melody on this tune.  I don't think you have much to do to get this super polished.  I'll be watching this thread.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 14:37:07 (permalink)
Liked this James. The guitar tone fits it well and comes across clean and well mixed. The changes added interest. Very nice all round.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 14:45:04 (permalink)
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Really liked that!  I kept waiting for "real" drums to kick in (as opposed to brushes or whatever you had laying to mellow groove down)  Maybe an occasional medium snare hit during the chorus of the first part, then when the dirty guitar comes in?  Otherwise super groovy. Awesome clean guitar tones.




Thanks a lot Sven That's a cajon loop doing the 'slippery' rhythm. I must get a real one, they're tons of fun to play.

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/08 18:01:17 (permalink)
Hey James!
 
Really like this one as well. I too hear some slight timing drift, and I suspect it is in your cajon loop.  Guitars are awesome, as is the bass. Nice flavors in the background as well. Well done!
 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 02:45:54 (permalink)
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hey james
great moody piece. perfect airy production as ever.
some of the bass/guitar runs seem a bit off tempo from around 2'05. again when the electric guitar comes in, the whole thing is a bit shaky timing wise.
anyhow. love the music.




Great to see you Mark! Thanks a lot for checking this out, glad you enjoyed it, shaky or not. When are we going to hear something new from you?

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 06:55:25 (permalink)
Nice. Really liked the guitar around the 2 minute mark.

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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 12:29:51 (permalink)
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Soft & Mellow, drifty but kept interest throughout with evolving instruments and melodic patterns.
 
Like sven said, personally too I wanted some hard drum hits to come out,@2:15 they are too soft I reckon.
 
Regards,
 
Cian




Thanks Cian, and nice to see you around again!

 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 12:30:54 (permalink)
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A nice, dreamy tune. The bass (?) is sometimes a little off beat, or is it the drums? Otherwise good job on the recording.





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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 13:27:59 (permalink)
Very nice number indeed!  I might agree a bit with the comments above concerning the drums -- especially when the more up-tempo parts kick in.  However, having said that, this piece really stands well on its own.
Nice one!
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 13:32:10 (permalink)
Very nice piece of music showing both of your musician and writing skills.
 
I found with the playback from box.com the bass was a little forward in someplaces, however I downloaded it, (that means I listend twice), and found that played back much more ballanced.
 
Thanks for sharing
 
PS Was that really Ed playing bass, I mean it was actually quite good
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 13:33:39 (permalink)
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PS Was that really Ed playing bass, I mean it was actually quite good





 
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/09 13:40:32 (permalink)
This is pretty cool.  It kind of sounds like a fusions of ambient and rock with a reggae influence.
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Re: 'St Mary's Clyffe' 2014/01/10 02:54:43 (permalink)
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I've listened to a couple of your compositions James and I am very much enjoying your style. Your musical ideas are always interesting, and captivating. Look forward to more of this one.



Well thanks very much Wayne, that's really nice of you.

 
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