mstodge
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'We Come Not To Play'
All,
Sorry to hog the board with two tracks, but i would really like some input into this track please.
Thanks Mark.
post edited by mstodge - 2013/01/21 22:31:53
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/21 22:57:48
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I tried to listen but youtube sucks so bad, it kept stopping and starting :-( I know why people put stuff there? But if you could put it on a streaming music site, it would be easier to listen to.
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mstodge
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/21 23:07:09
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Thanks for having a go Robby, you can try here: SoundCloud Mark.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/21 23:11:03
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Gotta love the cloud :-) I saw what looked like video games images for the bit that came through on youtube, this feels like it would fit well for something like that.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 07:16:04
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Nice track Mark. Not sure about the drum kit though, seems too bland for the piece. Maybe some orchestral or ethnic percussion?
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 07:48:19
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I like the string arrangement and really like the ethereal stuff going on in the background. Kind of agree with Jamesg about the drums.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 09:33:45
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nice work Mark! I think I agree with James on the drums, I'd like to hear some orchestral percussion - especially some timpani!
the link to soundcloud does not have this song in the set.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 11:12:54
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It is tough to blend orchestral and pop together. This is a pretty good blend though. I think there is a song in there, and a good one, but like the others, change the percussion (drop the pop parts basically) and develop the orchestral theme more as it sounded very epic. If I ever get the hang of photography, you are among the first people I am coming to talk to for music. :)
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 11:23:25
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I likes it and fouls hejar it to à chasing scene in some Fantazi action
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 11:26:17
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My god T9 I hate it.
I like this and could hear it to a chasing scene in some Fantazie action
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/22 14:01:00
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Aside from the percussion, this song fits the video quite well. It has tension that would go well with many action scenes.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/25 22:06:02
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Man, you're good. I love this! :)
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/25 22:25:25
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Great arrangement and dynamics but I'm not wild about the synth sounds. What your using?
This is nice piece, soaring and powerful.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/26 16:36:25
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hey i think in terms of actual material, this might be your best yet, instantly memorable riff which could work in a number of different instrumentations (would be a great folk metal track!) you need to keep this up and set to video, would be awesome
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mstodge
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/29 14:32:48
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Guys, really sorry for how long it is taking me to reply to your comments, been really busy with work.
Robby: thanks for sticking with it.
James: I absolutely agree with you regarding the drums so thanks for confirming it, I will work on that.
Doosie: thank you very much too.
Beagle: thanks for popping in for a listen. The drums does seem the main thing letting this track down.
Shad: thanks for your feedback. And I think you have got hang of photography just fine. I would be honoured to work on one of your videos.
Thank you Eko.
Lynn: thank you very much, I really appreciate it.
Janet: thank you also, glad you liked it.
Daryl: much appreciated, the synth was just there as a filler really due to me running out of ideas. It's something from omnisphere.
Mark: thanks for listening to this too, and your nice comments.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/01/29 14:54:56
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mstodge
All,
Sorry to hog the board with two tracks, but i would really like some input into this track please.
Thanks Mark.
Nice. Action Strings? Love the "pad" under the strings. It's all good to me.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/02/02 14:57:37
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Oohhh nice job Mark! This is really awesome and interesting! Although, I was hoping to hear some timpani in here!
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/02/02 15:09:47
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lots-o staccat-o...
very cool arrangement ...
well done Mark...
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/02/02 17:05:51
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Pretty cool track. Could do with some epic orchestral percussion doing some booms and bangs (not necessarily without the drum kit though) but other than that I really enjoyed it.
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Re:'We Come Not To Play'
2013/02/03 17:54:04
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Mark - this isn't my kind of thing - but I can appreciate any tune within a given genre if it is good - and this is really well done. I listened to the whole thing - enjoyed it all.
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