A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun)

Page: < 12 Showing page 2 of 2
Author
grayzer
Max Output Level: -85 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 254
  • Joined: 2003/11/07 07:12:09
  • Location: IRELAND
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/23 18:25:10 (permalink)
Yeah. This is growing on me. ;-)

Please listen to my band's new (post-prog rock?!) songs at www.reclaimmusic.com all produced using sonar X1!!
#31
grayzer
Max Output Level: -85 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 254
  • Joined: 2003/11/07 07:12:09
  • Location: IRELAND
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/23 18:27:40 (permalink)
The organ sounds are very nice....well chosen. The chord progression is lovely as well...trippy, dreamy sublime and ... morose! The vox melody is great. Lovely vibe. It's actually inspiring...nice filter sweep on the synth in the chorus.

Please listen to my band's new (post-prog rock?!) songs at www.reclaimmusic.com all produced using sonar X1!!
#32
Guitarpima
Max Output Level: -34 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 4125
  • Joined: 2005/11/19 23:53:59
  • Location: Terra 3
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/23 19:44:04 (permalink)
Great tune! I am mooded out now. It's too short unless you go concept on us and it leads directly into something else.

Notation, the original DAW. Everything else is just rote. We are who we are and no more than another. Humans, you people are crazy.
 
 Win 7 x64  X2  Intel DX58SO, Intel i7 920 2.66ghz 12gb DDR3  ASUS ATI EAH5750  650w PSU 4x WD HDs 320gb  DVD, DVD RW Eleven Rack, KRK Rokit 8s and 10s sub
#33
darylcrowley
Max Output Level: -48.5 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 2700
  • Joined: 2006/10/16 14:25:47
  • Location: Ludington, Michigan
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/23 22:36:43 (permalink)
I like the vocal effect, very similar to some Beatles tunes as well, must be a British thing.

Nice smooth backing tracks, I can't comment on the Pink Floyd sound since I missed that whole era.  I missed about 30 years worth.  When I left the road band in the 70s, we were playing Eagles and Loggins & Messina and original tunes that soundedl like the Eagles and Loggins and Messina, then for the next 30 years I listened almost exclusively to jazz.  Now I'm all screwed up because I don't even know what kind of music I'm supposed to play :)

Anyway, I liked this.  Very well done.

Daryl

Daryl Crowley
Sonica Labs I7 Quad Core -
Windows 7 64bit Professional
Sonar 8.5 Producer - Ozone 4
http://www.darylcrowley.com/
#34
twinkielk15
Max Output Level: -87 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 173
  • Joined: 2007/12/29 22:09:55
  • Location: Provo, UT
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 01:38:43 (permalink)
Very Floyd-esque!  I love it.  

Sonar 8.5.3 Producer Edition
Axiom 61
Edirol UA-25  
Behringer Truth B2030A
AMD Phenom II 3.2GHz Quad-Core
4GB DDR3 - 1066 RAM
Windows 7 64-BIT
#35
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 20:36:37 (permalink)
@grazer, thanks for the comments! As mentioned the synths were done with a Tetra. I just played around with the patch and EQ until I found tones that balanced nicely while having pretty different textures.

Iinteresting the lyric and the melody were just made up on the spot in a few minutes. If I'd actually worked hard on them, they'd probably have been a lot worse.

The song was basically done as an improvization of one of the synth parts, to create the chord progression, then everything else was layered over that.

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#36
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 20:37:52 (permalink)
darylcrowley


I like the vocal effect, very similar to some Beatles tunes as well, must be a British thing.

Daryl
It's just a doubled vocal, with different EQ and mic position for the two so that they blend together pretty well. Generally it's depending on them being pretty tight, so that they get a little phasey, though I'm not quite good enough to totally nail that effect all the way through. And in some cases that's a good thing, like the 'open my heart to the sun' part, it actually sounds nice in a messy sort of way to let them slightly be off from each other. I was kind of thinking of the Jefferson Starship album Sunfighter, which has a fair amount of that sort of thing going on, as does a bunch of JS music really.
 
 Occasionally towards the end it's tripled just to thicken it a bit more.

post edited by droddey - 2011/09/24 20:39:29

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#37
Toystein
Max Output Level: -87 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 171
  • Joined: 2003/11/15 13:46:31
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 20:41:38 (permalink)
I liked this a lot.  Not just saying that either.  Great vibe, and your vocal delivery and sound is perfect.

I agree with others on it being too short, but that's only because I liked it so much.  Any kind of middle instrumental would have worked to lengthen the song.  The Toms were sometimes a bit awkward, but no biggie.  Thanks for sharing.
#38
timidi
Max Output Level: -21 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5449
  • Joined: 2006/04/11 12:55:15
  • Location: SE Florida
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 20:43:39 (permalink)
geez. is that it? I loved what there was. it was just getting going. Finish it.

ASUS P8P67, i7-2600K, CORSAIR 16GB, HIS 5450, 3 Samsung SSD 850, Win7 64, RME AIO.
 
https://timbowman.bandcamp.com/releases
 
#39
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 21:47:16 (permalink)
BTW, it might not be obvious because it's such a slow tune, but some of what might make the toms seem awkward is that a number of those tom fills are in 5/4 or 3/4, but there's no snare or kick there to make it obvious that there's an extra or missing beat. So it might seem like it's throwing off the timing in a way.

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#40
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 21:49:07 (permalink)
timidi


geez. is that it? I loved what there was. it was just getting going. Finish it.

Like I said, it's a minature scale epic :-) Maybe a Weepic?

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#41
Janet
Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 8094
  • Joined: 2010/01/02 19:04:11
  • Location: Missouri
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/24 22:56:18 (permalink)
I could have enjoyed it for longer too. :)
#42
mstodge
Max Output Level: -71 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 984
  • Joined: 2008/06/09 08:44:13
  • Location: Liverpool England
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/25 05:57:25 (permalink)
Dean, this was fantastic. Loved the buildup and the chord progression was superb.
Drums were nice and meaty, vocals sublime, and synths exciting.

My only gripe is that is could have been a couple of minutes longer.

Mark.
#43
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/25 18:52:52 (permalink)
Thank you very much!

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#44
Bruce Baldwin
Max Output Level: -89 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 57
  • Joined: 2010/08/26 00:14:51
  • Location: Orange County, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/26 01:00:50 (permalink)
I enjoyed this, Dean.   It sounds like the start to something bigger.   Rick Wright would be proud...
#45
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/26 03:04:21 (permalink)
It's the first song on my new album called The Screen Door, kind of a slightly less alienated version of The Wall :-)

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#46
jamesyoyo
Max Output Level: -40.5 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 3460
  • Joined: 2007/09/08 17:50:10
  • Location: Factory Yoyo Prods Ltd.
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/26 08:20:50 (permalink)
Too short to be an epic, but it has all the pieces to be one.
#47
The Maillard Reaction
Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 31918
  • Joined: 2004/07/09 20:02:20
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/26 08:50:36 (permalink)

Yes, I really enjoyed the intro and I was left hoping to listen to more.

Good job!!!

Plus my mother in law walked in and asked "is that from the '70s?" so you know you are hitting the mark!

best,
mike



#48
droddey
Max Output Level: -24 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 5147
  • Joined: 2007/02/09 03:44:49
  • Location: Mountain View, CA
  • Status: offline
Re:A miniature scale prog epic (To the Sun) 2011/09/26 20:55:24 (permalink)
Yeh, that's interesting. Certainly I was going for the sound of yore, so that's a complement.

Dean Roddey
Chairman/CTO, Charmed Quark Systems
www.charmedquark.com
#49
Page: < 12 Showing page 2 of 2
Jump to:
© 2024 APG vNext Commercial Version 5.1