kloon
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A song about regrets
Hope you like it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SgR4BW2kAnU Regrets I dont want you to see me like this tonight
My soul is a mess from all the troubles in my life
Like a five year old kid i dont care about right or wrong
I know you can see me but Im just not here anymore
Yeah I lost my way a long long time ago
I tried to find my way back
But this life is a one way track
If i could do it all again
I would change everything that's a fact
Except the day we first met
That's not a thing i regret
I see the truth in your eyes
They never lie
Even when you're far away
Or here by my side
I feel your pain, deep inside
Let's escape for a while
We filled our lives with regrets
But im not gonna cry
No!
The truth falls hard on all of us that wanted more
I gave it everything i had
But i should have done more
A little boy is waiting for his father in the rain
Almost a lifetime later
I can still feel his pain
This is for all of us who was left behind
All of us of a different kind
Who lost themselves or someone else
Who refuse to stand in line
This is for all of us with a heavy heart
All of us though we're miles apart
Who had chance, just like everyone else
But messed it up some how
I see the truth in your eyes
They never lie
Even when you're far away
Or here by my side
I feel your pain, deep inside
Let's escape for a while
We filled our lives with regrets
But im not gonna cry
No!
post edited by kloon - 2018/12/16 05:06:32
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jamesg1213
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/13 16:33:24
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I do like it. One of the most professional and contemporary sounding songs I've heard here for quite a while, super production and a top notch vocal.
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/13 16:45:24
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Wow, this is very good Kloon!! Well produced and fantastic vocals. Is that you singing?
Certainly radio worthy IMO.
Great job on this.
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/13 17:32:45
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jamesg1213
I do like it. One of the most professional and contemporary sounding songs I've heard here for quite a while, super production and a top notch vocal.
Wow, thank you very much for your kind words! Mesh
Wow, this is very good Kloon!! Well produced and fantastic vocals. Is that you singing?
Certainly radio worthy IMO.
Great job on this.
Thanks mate! No, im not the singer. I work with a guy from the US. But i do absolutely everyting except the actual singing. Arranging, writing, etc..
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/14 04:07:37
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Very impressive! You guys definitely have a good thing going here... the vocals and arrangement of this are extremely well done. Simple, yet powerful.
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/14 05:06:18
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mettelus
Very impressive! You guys definitely have a good thing going here... the vocals and arrangement of this are extremely well done. Simple, yet powerful.
Thank you very much, and thanks for listening!
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/14 09:16:29
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Hi, This is really outstanding!  Excellent songwriting and arranging, great instrumental performances, and absolutely spectacular vocals! The mix is crystal clear and has radio-ready, modern production written all over it. Totally pro sounding all the way. Fantastic work, really great stuff! Have a good one, Bob
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/14 10:09:44
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Hi Kloon,
Good song, great mix and production.
Thanks for sharing.
Good Job!
paul
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/14 11:44:01
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Bob Oister
Hi,
This is really outstanding!
Excellent songwriting and arranging, great instrumental performances, and absolutely spectacular vocals!
The mix is crystal clear and has radio-ready, modern production written all over it. Totally pro sounding all the way.
Fantastic work, really great stuff!
Have a good one,
Bob
Hi Bob, Thank you very much for your kind words!! Being from Sweden it's really nice to get feedback from people who talk english native. I really have no idea how my lyrics come across for people who live in the US, but im really glad to hear they dont sound too weird. ;) Thanks again!
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/14 11:44:42
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thegaltieribrothers
Hi Kloon,
Good song, great mix and production.
Thanks for sharing.
Good Job!
paul
Thanks mate, appreciate you taking the time to listen. :)
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 14:00:22
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This IS fantastic, Mix & Song ... Right up my street ...you have real talent  Steve
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 14:37:51
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Great arrangement and production. A bit long for my taste but excellent all the same.
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 15:46:45
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This IS fantastic, Mix & Song ... Right up my street ...you have real talent
Steve
Thank you very much, very kind of you to say. daryl1968
Great arrangement and production. A bit long for my taste but excellent all the same.
Thanks mate! :) I try to vary my songs in length. Sometimes i end them right after the final chorus, and sometimes i go completely bananas with 8 minute songs. :) I quess it's the rebel in my trying to distance myself from the radio format. ;)
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 18:45:35
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I can see what everyone means. This is a fantastic song and mix.
The vocals are so professional - well sung and perfect effects without being over the top.
I love the way the verse is minimalist allowing the vocals to shine through and then the chorus kicks in with some very nice vocal harmonies and the more intense instrumentals.
Excellent work all round.
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 18:52:40
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Big Thumbs Up! I don't regret listening. How did you process his vocal? Love the tail.
-Tom
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 19:22:20
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Thank you very much ZincTrumpet & Tom for listening and your kind words, they make me very happy. I always use Waves CLA Vocals, as my main vocal fx. I've tried (and own) millions of other appz, but i always end up using CLA Vocals. So the tail is the built in delay and reverb.
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/15 23:31:09
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I can't get into modern pop music, but I thought what you did sounded as good as anything out there.
Wish you would have posted the lyrics.
Bill
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/16 02:17:52
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Wayfarer
I can't get into modern pop music, but I thought what you did sounded as good as anything out there.
Wish you would have posted the lyrics.
Bill
Thank you very much! :) First post updated with lyrics.
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/16 16:32:43
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This is for all of us who was left behind
All of us of a different kind
Who lost themselves or someone else
Who refuse to stand in line
This is for all of us with a heavy heart
All of us though we're miles apart
Who had chance, just like everyone else
But messed it up some how Very nice.
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/17 02:55:47
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I like this a lot esp the lyrics. I can hear the emotion and know the lyrics are heartfelt and come from experience. Kind of minimalist verse accompaniment which brings out the lyrics. Vocal treatment is very good! Thanks for posting.
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kloon
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/17 04:10:37
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Thank you very much Bjorn for your kind words, and thanks for taking the time to listen! :)
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/17 18:31:47
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Very well done!! The vocal performance is excellent -- emotional but without overselling the song/lyrics.
This has a very radio ready commercial sound!
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Re: A song about regrets
2018/12/17 19:36:15
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Thank you very much Freddy for your very kind words! :)
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