All Alone

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quest4success
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2016/04/16 23:38:52 (permalink)

All Alone

This song was mastered by LANDR.  Let me know what you think.
https://soundcloud.com/quest-4-success/all-alone

Music, as seen, through the eyes of Larry Bynum aka Quest For Success (QFS). 
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    dcumpian
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    Re: All Alone 2016/04/19 11:00:13 (permalink)
    Is this finished, or do you plan to adding another vocal over the top? If it is, then the vocal needs to come up as it is getting a bit buried in spots. Also, there are a few rather lengthy sections where nothing is really happening.
     
    This could be a really nice track, but it needs some better focus to make it a real song. Right now it is more about the beat and your bass line.
     
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    Dan
     

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    quest4success
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    Re: All Alone 2016/04/19 18:17:58 (permalink)
    Thanks.  The song is not finished. I will be laying down rap vocals but I'm always looking for constructive criticism. 
    I trust this forum to give me that.  My era of rap was during the Late 70's, 80's and 90's, so I'm in the process of changing my flow, so to speak.  That's going to take some doing since I haven't done it in roughly 15 years.  Finally got some time to concentrate on what I love.
     
    dcumpian
    Right now it is more about the beat and your bass line.
     

    A short coming for me because I was a DJ for most of my life and it was "Always about the "Beat!"

    Music, as seen, through the eyes of Larry Bynum aka Quest For Success (QFS). 
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