Almost There - New Song

Enjoyed it. No loops!!! nice mix.  Had more of a country feel to it than rock IMO.

I recorded a different "Almost There" about three years ago.  This one is a gospel song written by Nashville songwriter Jimmy Peppers.

The intro (and tab for the steel intro) is on my web site.  The intro is I, IIIm, IV, V, I.

http://www.gulfcoaststeelguitar.com/intros.htm

Pretty cool tune. It's probably just my cheap speakers but it sounded really bright to me.

great song and vocals  + + + 1

suggestion --- bass guitar is muddy

Yea this one is a winner , I like the drum track . Atlease you did get trapped in the bush like I did with my tune .
Sound pretty cool to me , nice going ! Radio

That's a good one. It is a fairly light on the low end mix, or perhaps a lot of it just below what's reproducable on these smaller speakers I'm listening. But it's not overly bright either, to me at least at moderate listening levels. Maybe more so during the guitar break.

The song flows and bops along nicely with plenty of energy. The transition to the middle section is a little abrupt maybe, and it suddenly also becomes much fuller tonally, which makes it seem a little out of place, the acoustic guitar part there I mean. I assume you wanted it not to sound too sparse when it went to the single guitar and voice? But it sounds a bit out of place.

Hi Paul,

I really like this song. Mix sounds good from here. Very nice but the ending is a little abrupt.

Very interesting music!  It almost has a 60's British Rock with a touch of country as well.  I really like the bridge on this.  The transition to and from it was very well done.

I have to agree with others that talked about the muddy vocal.

I really enjoy this!

Thanks for sharing,
Tom

Enjoyable song.  I think others have covered my comments already as far as the mix goes, but I'll just add that I agree on the low end boost and the sudden end.

Great song... Drums sound great.  Well played and sung.  I agree with most of the comments above...really nice.  Especially for your first song around here.  Wow! 

Nothing more to add except that I really like it. The guitar and drums sound amazing - how did you get the guitar sound? Real amp or software? Also, same question re the drums. Love the stereo separation on headphones, and yes, you can sing! 

Keep it goin'

Bill

I really liked this one ...Few minor crits...These are JMPO...The Lead acoustic parts are too loud and panned too far to one side and a little on the Bright side...When the Electric Lead comes in that`s where I feel the Acoustic lead should sit too maybe just slightly to the opposite side of where you have the Electric Lead. Also This needs a build up Intro it feels like you started at 100mph and went with it. Maybe something just acoustic and building till you get there would be really cool. Lastly no more than 2seconds silence on the beginning you have 4 and it probably seems nit picky but if your entering contests these things are taken into account since tunes are supposed to be Redbook ready. After readfing all that just remember I really did like this tune.

The song sounds great except for the low end. The bass needs to come up quite a bit.