And The Hits Just Keep On Coming...

Vocals up please! I get that you are going for reverb and delay swamp ( I like the delay on the vocal).
 
There we go, vocals come up nicely with the acoustic guitar!
 
I Like how the melody fits over the chords. Pink Floyd watch the hell out!
"Story songs" can be really awful and really boring. Yours is neither!
 
for your vocal, what delay are you using? Do you have a double instance of it or something? It sounds really sustained and really rich.
 
 
nice job, you seem to do consistently good work!
 
cheers,
-Tom
 
 

Nice .....  Almost 7 minutes of really cool music.
 
I really like this.  Good work on this all the way around.

I might add some spacey strat stuff there towards the end.  This is actually a fairly old track that I'd never put a vocal down on.  If you listen in the third verse you can hear my very first attempt at using the Wavelore Steel Guitar.  Pedestrian...but it works, I think.  The vocal chain is rather extensive...but I'll copy it down and post for you.
 

@Bit...OK, the intro vocal is:
WAVES NLS "Mike" drive 5
WAVES Vocal Rider set to "fast"
UAD LA2A "Grey" 3 to 1
SPL VOX Ranger to taste
D16 Fazortan to taste
Camel Space "extra voice"
Eventide Blackhole "transfigured"
 
Lead vocal is:
WAVES NLS "Mike" drive 5
WAVES Vocal Rider set to "fast"
T-Racks De-Esser "male"
UAD LA2A "Grey" 3 to 1
WAVES Manny Marroquin EQ to taste
WAVES CLA Vocals male to taste
M1 Limiter Lite
 
Vocal Bus is:
WAVES NLS Bus "Mike" Drive 6
FabFilter Pro-C "gentle wide mastering"
 
Hope this helps.  After hearing both the Jenny and Party vocals up on SoundCloud I'll definitely be tweaking both of them a bit and trimming some of the "fat". 
 

Yup...You're probably right.  And I love that little Vocal Rider (and Bass Rider) near to death.  I don't use it on everything but when I need that "flat-phat" sound it works a treat.

PS...don't forget the CLA adds (probably) a fair amount of compression as well...Chris loves it so.

I love verb.  Great listen.  Maybe stick the beginning vocal off to a side...or move it around in the beginning, to add more "reason" why it sounds the way it does.  Liked very much how it changed once the song kicked in. 
One minor nit might be to change the production "sameness" to it... (bring stuff in/out more to keep things changing) if you're shooting for that length of song.  Keep if from being "straight lined". 
Very creative.    oh yeah...love the reverb!  ;-)

Love this track.  I love the simple but effective vocal harmony for the first "My Jenny girl" in each chourus.   Nice work.
 
Twisted lyrics, but very effective!

what a great tune...man this was just up your ally....very slick..
 
great arraignment.
 
Loved it!

I have to say that you always tweak my interest when I see your latest song posted and I am rocked again by the diversity you show in your work. Your mixes are always great and a pleasure to listen to. Exemplary songwriting skills and imaginative arrangements. Accomplished musicianship. Now before your head bursts that sombrero just know that I'm not going to tell you how great "Jenny Girl" is. I just want to comment on your body of work and say that your ability speaks for itself. Its a treat to be pleasantly surprised when I click on you...............Via con Dios amigo......................Ron

@Ron...I owe you a martini Ol pal. Thank you so much for your kind words. I plan on having several more up soon (all different genres) and finally be shut of this particular project I've been dawdling to finish.

@Reece...Ditto...and that's actually a glass harmonica...not a synth.

As an FYI...today I replaced several tunes with new mixes due to my own listening and comments made here. Please check em out when time permits. 😀

Been out of the loop around here for a few weeks so this was my first listen back...    Nice.  Very nice.   +1 to pretty much everything above, just a great dreamy feel while maintaining interest.  Vocals sound great, real solid recording/tone.
 
Oh, and love the little guitar (?) fills, tasty.