BlueSky

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2012/01/24 20:05:41 (permalink)

BlueSky

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One drumline
One Melody
Am i talented???
http://soundcloud.com/boomin36beatz/blue-sky
thanx
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    bapu
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    Re:BlueSky 2012/01/25 01:28:06 (permalink)
    That is a really great backing track. Needs some more distinctive "lead" instrument and/or voice. JMO.

    Great start though.
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    Lynn
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    Re:BlueSky 2012/01/25 13:50:58 (permalink)
    Boomin36Beatz



    Am i talented??? 

    If you listen to some of the other submissions on this forum, that question will answer itself.  I agree with Bapu, it's a start, but it seriously needs some attention.  One beat and one melody for over 3 minutes is a roadmap to tedium.  Consider adding a break or bridge to change it up a bit.  The overall vibe that I get at this point is robotic.  It could use a human touch somewhere along the line.  




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    Boomin36Beatz
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    Re:BlueSky 2012/01/25 17:15:22 (permalink)
    @Bapu yep it needs definitly some good vocals.
    i've been looking for someone that wants to sing to this beat here.

    @lynn you are like always absolutly right.
    you are a very very good reviewer. thanx
    so what should i say now hmmmm let me think
    ok like i said i need vocals for finalizing the beat
    thats how i handle things but if someone wants a finished beat before recording no problemo the vocalist has to ask for it and i will do so for sure.
    but completing beats before recording means to me much more work.
    because at this point i have to handle only two lines
    my drumline (loopish)
    and the keyboard line.
    and it is much easier adding new elements then deleting.
    breaks could have been done easyli but i don't know if the artist wants to sing an already written text or wants to start to write  a new text.
    in the first case i think it would be better not to add too much.
    so i can give it human touch with some extra beats and breaks after recording.(maybe an extra melody) in the second case i would give the artist a finished beat but the artists that i know can't handle it that way
    because they are simply not good enough so ....
    so it depends on the artist wishes and skillz.
    so thats my point of view.

    and when it comes to listening to other artists on the web i have really trouble because of gsm inet connection.
    today i listened to other artist and took me an half an hour for two tracks.
    and uploading this lill beat lasted almost an hour.
    i wanted to listen to your last  post  but i wasn't able to  because of that.

    sorry for my miserable english and
    Thank you very much for listening and for your honest feedback.

    Best Regards
    Boomin36Beatz

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    Boomin36Beatz
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    Re:BlueSky 2012/01/25 17:25:44 (permalink)
    @lynn i will listen to your music when i get a better inet connection for sure.
    i am really curious.
    but with this gsm connection it is catastrophic so....
    thanx again for listening to my work.

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