Warrenlee
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Busted (mastered version)
Hi, Another pop-ish track from my upcoming record. Kind of a off kilter pop song with a slide guitar and keyboards...Have a listen and enjoy. All feedback welcome! http://www.reverbnation.com/leemoran Lee
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timidi
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/08 19:35:56
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Mix sounds balanced to me.
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bapu
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/08 20:05:08
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Being a bass player (at least in my mind) I say up the bass by 2db at least.
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Lynn
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/09 11:40:39
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I agree with bapu about the bass, but otherwise, I think this is a good song and mix. I like your vision.
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Starise
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/09 14:06:39
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Lee, I liked the up front feel to the mix. Sounds very earthy and homegrown as opposed to midi and mechanical. I agree with the comments about bass. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/09 22:57:12
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I think you need to keep working on this. The balances are all over the place and some of the licks need some work on them as well. But, it is a nice start and has potential.
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Warrenlee
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/15 21:12:03
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thanks to all who listened and the comments, always appreciated and welcome...
Best,
Lee
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Walt Collins
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/16 22:49:32
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Has a bit of a "Beck" feel, with the lazy vocal style and laid back instrumental layers. I like it! I do agree that the bass could come up a bit though.
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/17 08:18:29
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☄ Helpfulby Warrenlee 2013/09/17 09:00:31
Like the song, ALOT, but the kick and the bass could come up a bit!
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Warrenlee
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/17 08:59:08
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Has a bit of a "Beck" feel, with the lazy vocal style and laid back instrumental layers. I like it! I do agree that the bass could come up a bit though.
aaaah "Beck" is a wonderful comparison, thank you so much! I very much admire what his diversity. Appreciate the listen and comment! Lee
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Warrenlee
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Re: Busted (mastered version)
2013/09/17 09:01:29
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twisted6s
Like the song, ALOT, but the kick and the bass could come up a bit!
duly noted...I will swing back to this one and probably nudge up the bass....I'm immersered in 14 tracks right now, so these suggestions are very helpful indeed, thanks! Lee
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