Well, well...I gotta say that when I kept hearing that slightly irritating sound (of a gnat I guess?) that kept repeating I was gonna bail. But I didn't -- I liked the organization and sound of much of this. Around the 3 minute mark there's a strange violin melody that's reminiscent of something you might hear in one of Bartok's string quartets (oh man, those six of his are among the milestones of the canon) -- I wish you had developed that theme a little -- it could lead to some interesting motifs. All in all, this was well recorded and an ambitious work.
Bravo !!
Allan
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