Check out my new song please!

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2014/07/13 19:04:46 (permalink)

Check out my new song please!

"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhHzzLR-ddc"
 
Please let me know what you think :)
 
If you like what you hear, you can follow my facebook page for music here:
 
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    RussjWhite
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/13 19:18:27 (permalink)
    As many fine fellows said to me when I joined the forum.. Please get involved with other peoples songs/tracks, listen and leave comments.
     
    The mix is darn good, very punchy. Very well produced. Not my kinda music but done extremely well.
     
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/13 22:46:37 (permalink)
    Great job on the guitars and overall balance in my books. I would change the word "about" to "a bit" but what do I know. Vocals sound good too. Keep it up.

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/13 23:30:33 (permalink)
    Thanks, guys!  Your feedback means so much!
     
    Gusrogers, you're right.  I do need to get more involved with the cakewalk community.  I love their daw!
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/14 14:06:44 (permalink)
    Sounds to me like a couple of pop tunes from last decade, can not remember the band names though.
     
    Generally the mix is OK though for me it lacks middle warmth.
     
    Thanks for sharing.
     
    As Gus noted you will get better response for some areas here if you make a point of having a listen and leaving a comment even if it is just to say "I enjoyed" or "I did not".

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/15 17:22:18 (permalink)
    Like gusrogers sais ''Not my kinda music but done extremely well...sounded great to me
     
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/15 18:25:35 (permalink)
    well done .. rocks nicely and sound good


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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/21 18:47:30 (permalink)
    Yeah, nice mix for the style, very punchy.   As Wookie said it very much sounds like a few bands/songs from a few years ago, but I can't recall who they are either.   It definitely has pop appeal while still rocking. 
     

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/26 17:25:38 (permalink)
    Opens up like the MTV theme then jumps to a Greren Day/The Knack vibe.
     
    Well produced.
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/26 18:04:35 (permalink)
    Nicely done, it all sounds good.   I hear the other groups mentioned plus some Jimmy Eat World, Weezer, etc..   Production and performance is really good.

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/27 08:56:26 (permalink)
    Comparing this mix to others in the genre, I think you've done a great job of capturing that Punk Pop, Power Pop feel. Very nice, punchy and clean!
     
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/27 11:09:11 (permalink)
    Niiiiiiice!!!
     
    We don't get to hear much of this style on this forum (as great as it is...) 
    Brings back good memories : ) good mood tongue in cheek punk pop a la Blink... (what was the number again?), American HiFi, Feeder, ect...
    Very tight performance, well mixed !
     
    Keep on rockin'!
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/27 15:51:32 (permalink)
    I'm impressed!!  Good job on the production, and the song is very well-written and played. 
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/27 16:00:41 (permalink)
    Track sounds great. I actually googled the title because I thought it might be a Green Day cover. You've definitely captured that vibe.

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/28 08:55:25 (permalink)
    Great all around. Mix and song are very well done!

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/29 17:21:24 (permalink)
    Good straight fun-punk, enjoyed it! 
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/30 21:11:09 (permalink)
    Ahhh, one of my favourite genre --- early punky/new wavy.  You did an excellent job on this.  Your vocals are very good as is you playing and arrangement on this. 
    Nice stuff!!!
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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/30 23:52:04 (permalink)
    Welcome to the Forums!!!
     
    Excellent! I thought Green Day right off the bat. Mix is great but I'd  like just a little more bass guitar. Love that kick and snare. Thanks for posting!

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    Re: Check out my new song please! 2014/07/31 11:27:39 (permalink)
    Very clean and dynamic mix. Did you mix this? Great job if you did. 

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