Como un lunar (Like a birthmark) re-done again.

Hi again,

As per suggestions in comments from this fourm, I have just done the following changes to this project:

1. Replaced the notes played originally with organ voices, by a slightly distorted Wurlitzer piano (from Pianoteq), panned to the right.

2. Changed drum sets, and did related adjustments.

3. Replaced previous bass with Slap-bass, raised its volume somewhat. Overall accomp is now more simplistic rhythm, to match the theme, also as suggested.

4. Last but not least, lowered the key of the whole song by 1 semitone. That allowed singing the vocals over, with a little better projection and volume (I think). This was from my overall revisiting of the song aspect.

I hope that there is some noticeable improvement, and that some of you might so find it also.

Again, critique is welcome, and I hope to find ability to benefit from it.

The song is at Soundclick:

http://www.soundclick.com...857&songID=9414093

Thanks everyone!