Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback

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2011/11/19 18:39:06 (permalink)

Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback

Hi folks,
I am submitting the following to an Indaba remix contest, and would love any ideas for improvement. etc.  The vocal stems are provided by LIGHTS via Indaba, while the instrumentation is mine. 

The style is downtempo/chill.  I hope you enjoy it!

*fixed link* LIGHTS Banner remix

cw
post edited by cwestmont - 2011/11/20 00:23:04

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    Guitarhacker
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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/19 22:21:03 (permalink)
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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 00:25:49 (permalink)
    Whoa, thanks Guitarhacker -- not sure what I did wrong but I think it is fixed now in the original post and here:

    LIGHTS Banner remix

    Thanks again for the heads-up and I apologize for wasting your (and anybody else who clicked through) time. 

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    One can acquire everything in solitude - except character. -- Marie Henri Beyle

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 00:46:42 (permalink)

    Sounds really nice , good luck with the contest !

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 09:38:26 (permalink)
    +++1 great song ------ becareful vocals get lost at times
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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 14:33:08 (permalink)
    Thanks Radio, appreciate it.

    My music:
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    "If you can solve your problem, then what is the need of worrying? If you cannot solve it, then what is the use of worrying?"- Shantideva

    One can acquire everything in solitude - except character. -- Marie Henri Beyle

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 15:39:49 (permalink)
    Good input BIABDude -- I massaged the mix a bit today to try to correct that and some other things.  The update is up on Soundcloud.

    LIGHTS remix

    My music:
    Hummingbird Cinema (vocal tracks, covers and remixes)
    Mosaic Manifesto  (remixes and instrumentals)
    "If you can solve your problem, then what is the need of worrying? If you cannot solve it, then what is the use of worrying?"- Shantideva

    One can acquire everything in solitude - except character. -- Marie Henri Beyle

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 19:41:27 (permalink)
    Sounds great in the ear buds on my iPhone!

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/20 20:01:09 (permalink)
    Awesome.  Thanks Scottytunes!

    My music:
    Hummingbird Cinema (vocal tracks, covers and remixes)
    Mosaic Manifesto  (remixes and instrumentals)
    "If you can solve your problem, then what is the need of worrying? If you cannot solve it, then what is the use of worrying?"- Shantideva

    One can acquire everything in solitude - except character. -- Marie Henri Beyle

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/21 09:56:20 (permalink)
    Different tune.  How does this remix work?  Doesn't matter.  The first couple measures I was, ahhhh, so, so, and then as I listened I really got into it.  Sometimes the vocals were back a bit too much (imo) and sometimes plenty out front.  The good news is that you kept me through the whole song.  Great job!!

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    Re:Contest entry: LIGHTS! - would like feedback 2011/11/21 11:16:39 (permalink)
    Thanks evadianepug. I have struggled to fix the vocal mix levels and cannot seem to get it right -- something i'll need to figure out another day since the contest deadline is today. Appreciate your feedback. Just for background on remix opportunities in general, you may want to check out Indaba.com. They regularly host remix contests wherein an established artist (Paul Simon and Peter Gabriel are two recent examples) supply vocal and instrument sample 'stems' for Indaba members to build new versions of the song. Kinda cool. There are some very wild variations on the same stems -- really stretches the mind. Love your Chesterton quote, btw. thanks again -- cw

    My music:
    Hummingbird Cinema (vocal tracks, covers and remixes)
    Mosaic Manifesto  (remixes and instrumentals)
    "If you can solve your problem, then what is the need of worrying? If you cannot solve it, then what is the use of worrying?"- Shantideva

    One can acquire everything in solitude - except character. -- Marie Henri Beyle

    Windows 7
    Intel Core i7-4770 3.4 GHz
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