Counting Pieces by Voda La Void ( a song about murder )

Hopefully this one captures the creepy feeling I'm looking for.  You can really hear the Alice Cooper and Radiohead influences on this one.  
 
The song is about betrayal and a demented murderous mind in the after math of dismembering his lover.  Good times! 
 
Counting Pieces - Voda La Void

I was just about to give up (seemed repetitive) when the middle part where instruments dropped out and bass and vocals (acoustic also) took over.  Is it creepy?  yes.  I do believe it captured what you are describing.  Man, I don't know what to say.  I couldn't understand most of the lyrics but maybe that's good!  This song will haunt me for awhile.  The Post Partem Depression theme for Lynn's song was a bit depressing but a fact of life.  Though your theme is also a fact of life, I don't think I want to know what you were saying.  Maybe that's the cowardly side of me. I thought the music was really interesting and good.

Lynn - thanks for the critique.  I am getting the same from others too about bringing the vocals up.
 
evadianepug - hey thanks for listening and I'm only kind of sorry I creeped you out.  I will bring the vocals up to help in understanding the words.  They're not graphic.  Perhaps I should have gone more extreme, but I was channeling Alice Cooper sitting in a room with pieces of his wife around him...in that "Steven" mindset...
 
Electro - thanks for listening, also.  I had a similar exchange on Facebook with a friend of mine.  I had posted something about writing a song about cutting up my wife into pieces.  And I purposely left that dangling there, without any 'lol' or comedic validation.  My friend asked what my wife thought about it and I said "I don't know, she locked the bedroom door on me..."  
 
We apparently have a similar demented side...nice to meet you, brother.  Ha ha!  

How the heck am I supposed to go to sleep now!!!
 
Very creepy! I agree about the vocals. Maybe not bring them up with dbs but compression. One thing I've been doing is use the PC76 and setting a long attack and short release with about -8db of gain reduction and set the mix knob to 40% so you get more of the original signal and them chain maybe two of the LA-2A emulations using -0.5db of gain reduction on each. It seems to work well and the compression is not really audible.
 
Nice work but stop creeping me out!!! Give me fair warning so I can listen in the daytime. ;-)

Nice work Tim. You seem to have the knack of picking a theme and bringing it to life with music. Love the vocals, I agree that they could be a bit more up front, not necessarily louder, just with more clarity.

Nice Halloween theme tune.