Creep or weirdo?

I like your song? I'm looking for the right words for your vocals?

I never heard this before, but it reminded me of Bowie.... in a few ways. 


ditto on the recommendation to fix the vox.  Your voice is pretty cool, it just needs to be on pitch.  Melodyne could really do that justice.  Hope you don't take that the wrong way... I use ME on ALL my vocals.... ME actually made me a vocalist....

Robert: your productions are really coming along nicely man. Ditto on the vocals...and I know you know this. I give you so much credit for just throwing it out there and doing the best you can. It's only going to get better if you keep at it. The first thing is to try and figure out where the pitch issues are and try to fix them when/if you know they are off. I remember when I started singing...I was pretty terrible I must admit. But it's either I kept at it...or would have had to wait until I met a singer to sing for me. So I chose to sound like crap for about 5 years trying my best...and one day, I actually got a compliment on my voice and noticed I didn't sound as horrible any more. LOL!!! So just keep at it brother and try to fix the things that are off if you can hear them. If you can't hear them...you have to have someone point them out. I know you have thick skin and want to be the best you can be. Keep at it man...and good job on the production on this. Just work on those vocals and you'll be in good shape. :)

-Danny

Thanks for listening everyone!

Don't worry about giving crits, especially my vocals. I know I still have a long way to go there. I usually play the melody and try and match the pitches. Well, I'm at least getting better. The notes were closer than they usually are. lol! I should have joined the chorus in high school. :(

I appreciate the feedback! Good and bad.

Robert - nice production - good playing - I really enjoyed what you did with this tune. Yea, the vocals . . ., but other than that - very nice.

I like the song and production. I like the emotion in your voice as well. Well done.

Instruments sound really cool. Clean sounding production.

Wookiee singing is dangerous to non-Wookiees so this Wookiee say nothing about singing.

Good take on the Raidohead song sounds good here, thanks for taking the plunge and sharing.

Hi Robert,

Great job on this tune. I'm not familiar enough with the original to make a comparison but your version sounds great from here.

Thanks for listening and the nice comments. I appreciate it!

It's hard to find songs not about christmas on the song forum.

I like the instrumentation, you have done an excellent job.

The vocals, could work because of the type of song it is, the way you sing the song, you could imagaine a spotty teenage kid being creepy looking into the girls lockerroom.

The only problem with the vocals is you haven't picked the right inflections because some of the off tune stuff works, it sounds a lot like Leonard Cohen.  I hope you understand what I mean.

We both know there are a lot of not so perfect singers out there but a good producer would have been able to put together a really good vocal track and the way you sung it, it would have really worked.

Nice job though, I liked it and at least it wasn't a ****en christmas song.

Bah Humbug Ben

Thanks everyone! I appreciate the good feedback.

No thanks on the creepy kid thing Ben. I have accidentally walked into the women's restroom before and almost got in trouble. Now I carry my cane all the time. I'm almost blind. I can see to get around but I'm not good at watching out for people and at 6ft 4 and could have been a wrestler, it's not good for the other person.

SteveStrummerUK


 
Hi Robert
 
The instrumentation and mix is very faithful to the original.
 
Nice job.

^^^^

Agreed. Plus, you sing better than me.

Thanks for listening everyone. I appreciate the comments as well.

Thank you!

Thanks Warren! I appreciate the nice feedback. The song is an oddity though. I loved it the first time I heard it.

Another oddity would be Planet P. They had one hit called, "Why Me." I"ve been working on that one but can't get past the oscilating sound at the beginning. grrrr!