Cryin' *Updated* Much better

This is a beautiful song that I want to start doing live. I need to clean up the end a bit but other than that it is a very pretty song. What do you guys think?

Cryin'

IT IS A WORK IN PROGRESS...THE GUITARS HAVE SOME MISSED notes and some general sloppy parts towards the end but I have not properly learned those bits and kinda just wing it...so please forgive this if you do listen .. they are being fixed...if you want a finished version wait a day or two or listen to Joe Satriani's version. thanks

mark

I am still open and anxious to hear your thoughts.

yea...ok then thanks melf......ok ....anyone else???
do we agree with melfs assesment or is he upset about other issues not pertaining to this song and/or my performance therin?
I would love to hear your version melf...could you please post it...
thanks
Mark

You got it rolo...how about the first couple of minutes of it? would that work for now?
Mark
PS good to see you....did you say hello to melf?

Mark, yes, this is a very pretty tune. I haven't heard the original, so I have nothing to compare it to, but enjoyed it. I do hear a lot of the exciter, as Rolo & Melf mentioned, though.

No melf thats not it.....Its just you come into a thread where someone posts a song and say nothing but negative stuff. I mean if you did not find anything you liked about it at all then #1 why post, I wouldnt. and #2 why would you not say I am disapointed. I think you could have done better/different here and blah blah blah....or maybe it would have been much more pleasing without the Vintage warmer. You have posted stuff I thought was good before and I know you might have done a bit better on this one....or something like that. Just come in and puke all over the song...well then yea I want to hear your perfect version. Wouldnt anyone melf?
Thats all
Take it easy
Mark

Ok so let me start this post by saying your guitar playing and recording techniques are top notch, if you enjoy doing spot on covers, thats great. Your such a good player that i would think there is some great original material just waiting to ooze out of you. doing covers is great, i play in a cover band because i can make money to buy more gear. but i dont even do spot on covers when i play live I generally just try to play in the style of the artist i am covering. I like being creative with stuff, putting my own stamp on it.

you probably have heard this before and I am not trying to take anything away from what you are doing, i just think it would be great to hear more of what you do.

Jason

Hey Pluto...Thanks man...workin on it.

Stratboy77:(Jason) Thank you for the post I do appreciate it. I dont know if you have looked around my soundclick page but there are actually 4 originals there. Something New, I am a JO,Spanish dancer, and Bounty Hunter . I do have many works in progress but I really struggle to write quality music and the covers help me do stuff productively in the meantime. I do the covers as a way to become a better producer. I have fun with the attempts as well. I always post them even when they are substandard like this one here. I dunno why I just like to. Thats about it. Thanks for the post and I took nothing you said as negitive or bashing.

Justapicker: Thanks again friend. I appreciate the fact that you always take the time to post. Very grateful....
Thanks all

bump

Thanks Jeff....Its a Joe Satriani song from "The Extremist" disk. It is one of many many great satriani tunes. I am doing Summer Song at the moment for our pal Rolo.
Thanks for posting
Mark

Thanks rolo it is comming out really good....actually....the mix is pretty tight...here I will send a snippet......I will email it to ya....Nice radio spot there pal....good work...absolutely pro.
Mark

Hey Xavier, lets do one another a favor....OK? This is the 4th series of posting conversations we have "enjoyed" with one another. You remember the other three? I will remind you of one the second third your on your own to find. The first time was when you reopened a thread that had been dead and gone for over a month where there was some real jousting going on and several including myself people were acting like buffoons, and decided to reprimand me about my "relationships" and how you blah balah blah...Your opinion was not solicited then as it is not now....Xavier I have watched you in your cute conversations with MightyLee and others where you were showing us all a bit of that excellent charm that sets such a powerful example for the rest of us to follow eh.

I am kidding of course you were an absolute Jerk all puffed out with that real, "personal trainer tough guy" attitude pounding your chest on and on. I will tell you this, your true self burst through beautifully choc full of ego and arrogance. So dont ever lecture me as to what your sick of or not sick of because you are a hypocrite and an instigator. You like to stir up crap because thats ALL you have ever done with me. I challenge you Thor, to find ONE conversation that we have had that you did not initiate very very similar to this one, real Righteous and snotty. I challenge you to this jack lilane. SO..I tell you what deflate your chest let the belly out a little take a deep breath and wallow in your hypocracy because you are what you are....and that is an unpopular, opinionated arrogant chest puffing pissant that needs to find another mark to try on...cause I dont buy what your dishing out....it tastes like crap.....
Thanks for posting...Richard Simmons.
Mark


Here I will show the viewers your nice way with people

Tissue? That excited huh? Kind of confused here. I live in Japan. I thought you lived in Charlotte. Anyway, good to get to know you little guy. Bet you won't forget me now. I'm surprised you can't remember my name. Say it fast like a good Charlotte boy.

Ok lets see ...

the only thing fat about me is my paycheck. Yes, I understand sarcasm-just thought it was funny though-I checked out that thread you were talking about and your dream guy that you talk in your post is what I am-but I'm not proud about it-I'm in Japan training certain individuals in certain things. I know you live in Charlotte. Sorry little guy.

Is there more?? Whats this a little of what you said I do....the I was just kidding stuff??? Is that what your doing here????NO SAY IT AINT SO...thaaaaaaats right sy it with me once.."My Name is Xavier, and I am a hypocrite...."

I've just been playin' wif ya Lee boy. Nuffin' serious on my side. Just seeing how easy you get shaken. Sometimes the people who dish it out so wasy can't take it, but I think you're gonna do jus' fine. Seem a bit touchy sometimes but hell, you'll probably be fine when you grow out of that little stage you're going through. The vein in the neck cracked me up. Good to get to know you.

before you judge another, think of your own last mistake.

ORIGINAL: 6stringsat100mph

Thanks rolo it is comming out really good....actually....the mix is pretty tight...here I will send a snippet......I will email it to ya....Nice radio spot there pal....good work...absolutely pro.
Mark

great!!!!!!!
glad you like my work...

hey guess what....
i dont have sound card anymore.......

i love your song without VOX.... but cant record the VOX lines ideas.....
Rolo.

Thanks Rick...I appreciate your input...I think your absolutely right about my little oversight regarding tuning. Thanks for your very gracious and kind words. Thanks very much
Mark

it tastes like crap

now how would you know that?

Thanks very much Don...I needed that...it gets goofy around here......but thanks for your encouragment...
Mark