Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/13 16:54:19
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Update!!! Now longer version
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elix
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/13 17:04:44
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not bad , but you need a vocal for this music genre !!
in any case the track need a punch in drum session and more stereo emphasis.
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chuckebaby
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/13 17:19:44
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nice piece.
a lot of little hooks in there placed creatively.
however needs some thump, it is thin and frail.
I know you said no feedback,
sorry I don't get it, I thought that's what this forum was for.?
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Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/14 02:54:18
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@elix Thanx for listening. Vocals??? yep it really needs Vocals :-) @Chucke I am really really sorry. I don't want to hurt any feelings here at the Forum. People at cake forum are always very kind to me but the melody is already drawn in my Head and i don't want to be influenced from outside. i just want you to enjoy the music and of course i am happy when you leave a comment such as good or bad but that's it. i will rename the thread. Once again thanx for listening
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/14 05:14:15
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no probs,
the one thing I never do is tell someone where melody's belong.
good or bad, its their song,(its like their child )
its more of a mix issues I like feedback with, atleast in my personal experiences.
I enjoy feedback because its an outside ear that hears things my fatigue cant.
something happens to our songs after writing them we become prone to ignore certain aspects of the frequency unless we step outside for a while.
those are the things I enjoy feedback on.
melody's, those shouldn't be judged, im not sure I have heard anyone in the song forum suggest musical changes.
its one one of those things that's like telling a painter to use different colors, rather than suggesting where to sell your painting.
at any rate, I liked your piece it was very good.
and I understand your stance :)
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/14 11:06:26
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Well, I did listen but I didn't enjoy that much because it seemed "thin and repetitive". That's not meant as an insult! It just means that imo it needs a lot of work. So, I am not critiquing. You said to enjoy the music and I'm telling you why that is more easily said than done. I think that down the line you could beef it up but the melody line (that which you don't want to change) just doesn't have any balz. That might change once you add your stuff. I will look for that version. Also, to make a longer version of a song that has very few melody changes seems, well, strange. If you change the name let us know that it was this song. You are fairly new here and I think I have heard some of your stuff and liked it. Keep 'em coming.
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Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/14 13:26:27
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@Chucke You seem to know what i am talking about :-) It's really like a apart of the Soul. Usually i look for feedback on my mixes too but in this case it was (Dedicated) so it has got to be produced by me without any kind of help. (a personal thing) I have spent one and an half day so far so it's logical that it needs more time and Hard work. I don't know how fast other producers do work. but this is how i do. and once again Thanx for taking the time for posting. and i am really happy to hear that that you liked it. :-) @evadianepug Ok I c as we all know it's a matter of taste. so i don't take it personal. and you are absolutly right i don't want to change the riddim Because i love repetive things wich have to be catchy for almost 3-4 mins. i could easily compose 64/128 even 256 but there would be lame (boring) sections. that's why i don't like classical music ala bach and co i guess i am one of those who think LESS is More :-) Repetive and of course i will let you know when i should change the name but i think Dedicated is Good Thanks for being honest and leaving this critcizm. I wish you all the best
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Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/15 22:19:08
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Update!!! half of the work done :-)
post edited by Boomin36Beatz - 2013/04/17 11:45:27
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blipp
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/16 16:40:06
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Listened to the update and it sounds quite nice melodically, but it needs a lot more development to keep it interesting. Therer needs to be some break or diversion from the main theme as it gets a bit monotomous after a while.
I picked up my guitar while it was playing and had an enjoyable jam along with it.
Hope you can develop and expand on this and maybe add some vocals as this has potential.
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Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/17 11:52:46
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@Blipp Thank you for listening nice to hear that you enjoyed it. are you talking about something like this??? http://soundcloud.com/skeletor-beats/dedicated Vocals??? Yep i hope that's going to be the next stage but before vocals i need to clean up the mix first.
post edited by Boomin36Beatz - 2013/04/19 21:03:30
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Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/19 21:02:30
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another update i am sorry it is only another lill update. gotta work on a new project now some feedback would be nice
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CLEAN
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Re:DEDICATED NO FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!
2013/04/20 22:06:35
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Cool idea - but feels incomplete. The mix needs a lot of work - I really wouldn't know where to start. The drums are very weak. Keep working on it - a lot of potential with this.
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Lynn
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Re:DEDICATED Feedback!!! :-)
2013/04/21 12:11:14
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I'm used to hearing riffs from you, and, instead, you've given us a complete song to digest. That's cool! This is on the way to becoming a good song, but, as others have said, the drums are the weak link. When you advertise "Home of Bone Crushing Beats" then you need some bone crushing beats in the music. I think that's all you need for a good mix. Best to you.
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Boomin36Beatz
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Re:DEDICATED Feedback!!! :-)
2013/04/22 06:30:39
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first of all thank you very much for listening and leaving such kind feedbacks. and i have to say sorry for my late reply but i have trouble with my cellphone accesing this page and writting something. @ Clean thanx Incomplete? Yes that's what i am thinking too. Mix needs to get cleaned up??? Yes but just a lill bit. otherwise the swing and the feel would get lost. Where to start??? Maybe you have already noticed i put a couple of samples in for giving you a overview of the structure. (Songwriters) :-) once again thanx @Lynn Hello Lynn nice to hear that from you :-) yep riffs but all what you have heard from me up to now They are all expandeble like this one here. it's all about sorting things correctly inside of Sonar because if i want to change something Like structure, rhytmic, or etc etc... i am able to do it easily :-) music playing it self takes only a min but the rest hurts but as WE KNOW No sweet without sweat. when it comes to my new signature home of Bone crushing Beats (aka Judge Freddy Dredd aka Skelet to the Bone), all i can say is I have been already working on a new Bone Crushing Beat :-) Once again thank you very much Lynn You are really a very kind proffesional musician and i really i mean really apriaciate your criticism. and of course I'll listen again to the drums but this time closer with more atttention and will try to get it a bit punchier. ;-) All the Best to you SK
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