Define Chaos?

Hi all,
 
Here is a new track of mine 'Define Chaos?'
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/markstothard
 
Please offer me your comments and advice.
 
I'm still working on the other track 'Resistance' But got sidetracked by this.
 
Best
Mark.

Listened twice... like the autopanners I'm hearing on the keyboardy/guitary instruments.  And the soundscape underpinning the strings. I may go for a deeper kick. It may be a little cluttered in the mid-range to me when all of those percussive instruments get going? But there are some good elements and ideas here, I would say it's a good start. 

cool...different to your usual stuff, much more an album intro/interlude than a film score type...shows you are very versatile. love the use of strings and guitar, and the way the piece builds up is extremely effective. personally i would like more diverse percussion than just the kick drum, but certainly you need something driving it along like that...fantastic quality as ever, the sound is a million bucks!

Awesome track!  It has a great atmospheric and theatrical feel to it.  Love how you use different instruments.  The nylon string guitar doing the background is quite interesting.