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Hi there, the guitar is nice. The instruments seem to in front of the mix, ahead of the vocal. I like my mixes the other way, but just personal taste. The changes in the music are good. Blessings

don't hide yourself. Let yourself shine in how God made you-beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Paulo. I think I did well on the vox here. We put a little delay on my headphones so I had more confidence as I belted it our.

It was a little hard for me to listen to sometimes--that body thing. Being a woman, it kinda unnerved me.
 
Cymbals cut off a little short. 
Your voice is actually pretty good. Almost great.  There's a strong, real quality to it. Unaffected, unwarbled, like rock singing should be. Work on your control just a tad, and it will be superb.  But isn't there something that Phillip uses for that called Melodyne? I know nothing about it. I just know that Phillip will throw a pretty raw song onto the forum, then go back and apply Melodyne, and it comes back again sounding great.

Beagle took voice lessons and I could hear the improvement in his voice. I had told him that his voice sounded better, and that's when he told me he'd been taking lessons.

Great guitars. Wonderful solos. 

You are a soloist. Really. All you need is a tad more voice-tweaking and a lot more confidence.

I agree--you can sing.  Keep at it. :-)  I didn't hear the accidental note in the beginning. 

At times it seemed like a few too many guitars playing at once.  But I may be the only one in the world who thinks that.    Good job!

I just uploaded what will be the final master to soundclick. Thanks for your feedback.

Welcome any other input from the forum.

yo b! thanks again for checking out my song.

I had a drummer friend lay down the tracks on these songs. He played a DW kit and was recorded on about six mics.

I went to work with a producer friend so I could focus on the performance and not fret about the production.

He just upgraded to some new plug ins and a new set of hardware. He is experimenting with all his new toys. I give him y'all's feedback so I will let him know about the drum sound.

Thanks for the feedback on the gtr and bass. This set is three songs I wrote 20 years ago and I wanted to give them life before I get too old. (turning the big 4-0 this year and I still have so much i want to get done.)

It felt great to bring these songs to life and I appreciate your input.

Hey, Frank. Thanks for your input. Appreciate the encouragement.

I will ask my friend about how he is treating the snare. I listened close to it this time and it is sort of too loud and a bit too present.

Enjoyed the listen. Your vocal is great. The left guitar is slightly off beat at some instancies. Cut and paste! Neither do I like the snare drum, it has a ringing sound which is a bit annoying. Minor nits, otherwise great performance with a slight live feeling to it!