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2012/09/09 13:16:54 (permalink)

'Differences' - my first colab with Bapu

This one is a new original colab song featuring Ed Kocol (Bapu) on bass guitar and as co-writer.
I needed the long nosed pliers in my pocket to reach some of the high notes on this one.
 
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 13:34:35 (permalink)
cool tune....

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 13:56:30 (permalink)
The current Ms Bapu (aka The Lovely Lady) says it should be in a David Lynch movie.
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 14:04:18 (permalink)
Fantastic song. Great vocal delivery, a bit Robert Wyatt, a bit Ian Broudie. Love the production too, loads of depth and atmosphere.

 
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 14:04:38 (permalink)
Brilliant!  If I didn't have to take off just now, I would have started the song over.  

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 18:12:21 (permalink)
Thanks Herb, I appreciate it
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 18:23:03 (permalink)
GREAT tune. vocals are resplendent! 

this is something i would buy.  A+ 
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 18:40:04 (permalink)
Hey Daryl
The structure/chord progression of this piece is just awesome. Excellent build up and space created with arrangement and instrument choice.  Vocals and harmonies are great delivering that catchy hook.  At 0:54 I'm diggin the bells.  MIx sounds full and clean on my end.  If I had to nit, the lead vocal kinda has a radio effect that makes the vocal sound muffled and not as clear.  IMO I can see why you have it but would like to hear the LV with less of it.  I think it would make the vocals sit better with the rest of the mix.  On my 4th listen and WOW what a great job you have done with everything.  KUDOS my friend!

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 20:25:42 (permalink)
Daryl, you and Ed have cooked up something that I can sink my teeth into.  The song builds up as it goes along, and by the end of it, it keeps playing in my head which makes it quite memorable.  I got used to the vocal f/x as it went along, and it adds an interesting flavor to the overall mix.  I will keep coming back to this from time to time.  Bravo.

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 21:05:28 (permalink)
Ahh Love and regret... It's a natural progression isn't it? If winter comes, can spring be far behind? A natural progression. And part of the human condition I fear. We long for relationships, with all of their brain chemicals, desire, and then separation anxiety turns to just plain "anxiety..." And like Meatloaf, we're praying for the end of time... 

And you can't start over :-( You have to start anew... And the concept of starting over "again" I've written about that too :-) We're all morons (most of us anyway) when it comes to relationships. One of the definitions of insanity is doing the same thing again and again and expecting a different result...

I really enjoyed your song, because I could relate to it among other reasons. Great vocal performance/delivery. Wonderful production and performances. The recording is crisp.

post edited by The Band19 - 2012/09/09 21:08:22
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/09 21:43:51 (permalink)
Wow--great team and great song!  I love the performances and the mix sounds so good!  Kudos!   
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 06:56:15 (permalink)
Bapu - thank the current Mrs Bapu for me
James - thank you sir - I respect your opinion so that means a lot - cheers
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 07:10:26 (permalink)
I really really love the mood of this song. Vocal delivery is exquisitely English, as is the arrangement.

For some reason, the tambourine in the chorus threw me...it is perfectly in time, but it seems out of place for a sad and wistful tune...wish I could say why.

Great words and playing, guys.
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 09:23:03 (permalink)
Really liked it. Nice melody and lyrics. Great job on the production and arrangement. The HH on the right is abit distracting. Maybe turn it down just a bit.

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 13:18:45 (permalink)
I liked the song and sounds.. great job


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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 14:48:48 (permalink)
Totally agree with Bapu's Lovely Lady. This is a wonderful song. I don't know about the long-nosed pliers (wince) but I reckon your voice is outstanding; you give such emotion to this song and with such power that the lyrics have devastating impact. Any quality film director would beg to have this song on their film.

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 16:52:06 (permalink)
Jan (Old55) - thanks mate - i appreciate it - have you had another listen?
Darren (Virus) - Resplendent - I love it - thanks again
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 17:17:43 (permalink)
This is great - loved it ! Reminded me a lot of "Breathe" by Depeche Mode - always loved that tune.  Plenty of Lightning Seeds influence too, always a good thing for me. Bapu sounding cool too - who'da thunk it ?
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 17:28:08 (permalink)
Hi Daryl & Ed,

Great song, gentlemen. Very cool chord changes/melody lines, excellent production/mix (on my cheap headphones) and vocal performance.

Love the tremolo guitar and that glockenspiel (or whatever it is) sound.

Sounds fantastic.

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 18:07:21 (permalink)
I really like the simplicity of the song structure --- just  V1, V2...Ch..Ch. nice and to the point and just the right lenght - my take on it. 
 
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 21:39:36 (permalink)
Kev - thanks for your compliments - I will have a relisten to those vocals - I appreciate your ears

Lynn - thank you for listening - I am glad we have cooked up a treat for you :)
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 22:27:40 (permalink)
This has Moody Blues feel, if the orchesrtal sounds were a little more orchestral, it would be a very good fit.

I like the arrangement, good lyrics, good vox.  I thought guitar tone could use a little warmth, but that's my only crit.

Hat's off to my other brother!  Daryl

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 22:56:38 (permalink)
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Jan (Old55) - thanks mate - i appreciate it - have you had another listen?
Darren (Virus) - Resplendent - I love it - thanks again

Two or three by now.  

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/10 23:04:26 (permalink)
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Jan (Old55) - thanks mate - i appreciate it - have you had another listen?
Darren (Virus) - Resplendent - I love it - thanks again

Two or three by now.  


You rule Jan :)
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/11 07:33:17 (permalink)
The Band 19 - thanks for your kind words. You'll be glad to hear that the story had a happy ending.......again.
Janet - thanks so much - Bapu was responsible for a large amount of the Chorus - lyric and tune. I had the verses and the music for the choruses done but couldn't come up with anything decent.
I'm indebted to him for that and his great bass playing on this one.
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/11 08:10:01 (permalink)
Really nice Daryl. +1

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/11 13:26:13 (permalink)
Genius! This is the level of musicianship i want to reach, damn fine song with fantastic lyrics, exquisite vocals and a top quality professional sounding masterclass.

I loved everything about this song.

Thanks so much for the ear candy.

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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/11 15:39:17 (permalink)
Killer song/production... Vocals are outstanding...
great work Daryl & Ed...
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/11 20:01:52 (permalink)
Jamesyoyo - wow - 2 really's - thank you - really :)

Vicente - thank you sir - I will go and listen to that HH
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Re:'Differences' - new original song about love and regret 2012/09/12 14:15:01 (permalink)
Makke - thanks for the listen sir

Malcolm - thanks for that - I would love to have it snapped up for a movie

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