Dirty Lies (Original)

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notthatverygood
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2012/03/09 20:10:56 (permalink)

Dirty Lies (Original)

The song Dirty Lies by my band Bloody Reverie. Vocals by Larissa Marie Music by R. Machine (me) http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9595776 Sonar X1 Producer, Guitar rig 4, iZotope
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    Guitarhacker
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    Re:Dirty Lies (Original) 2012/03/10 08:30:39 (permalink)
    Not too bad.... the girl can sing. 

    The music sounds good.... 

    I wouldn't call it Goth.... maybe a cross between heavy rock and pop on the darker side.... either way, well done. 

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    Re:Dirty Lies (Original) 2012/03/10 11:12:14 (permalink)
    I like this song quite a bit.  My only problem is I couldn't hear the lyrics very well.  Simple fix:  turn the vocalist up.  She has a very nice voice, and it deserves to be heard and not buried in the mix.  Otherwise, well done.

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    Re:Dirty Lies (Original) 2012/03/10 13:15:04 (permalink)
    Good song, I like the arrangement and the harmony guitars are nicely done. Vocals could be dynamite if they were cleaned up and put in the same 'room' as the band, as it is they're sounding detached from the whole.

     
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    Re:Dirty Lies (Original) 2012/03/11 11:15:18 (permalink)
    Thanks for taking the time to listen and give advice. I will continue working on it to make it the best it can be.
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    Re:Dirty Lies (Original) 2012/03/12 08:18:08 (permalink)
    I liked this a lot. Agree with jamesg re the vox - needs a bit of work to place her better in the mix, but otherwise sounds pretty good. I'd certainlt like to hear it again once you've tweaked it.

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