Edited-Ain't no Blues Song.

I'd say your playing is pretty darn tasty! Neat parts. But I think there is so much going on with tricky hard panning and delays that it's obscuring some of the "realness" and that's what I'm missing.
 
Singing works for me, I like your bgv's too. 
 
I think you could safely make the bass a little fuller, it might weight it down some. For me the extreme hard panned guitar kept pulling my ears to the edges of the stereo spectrum.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Man, I like this one a lot! Very slick song with a sweet arrangement and a bunch of high quality and quite fun performances all around. Vocals are just great. I also totally dug the lead work, very sweet licks indeed. I agree with Tom's panning comment with the caveat that it might work better if the guitars on either side followed the same strum rhythms so that there's less ping-ponging going on, particularly at the beginning where so much seems to be happening; a more focused approach could help pull me into the vibe more quickly.
 
I also agree with the comment on the bass, which is played very nicely, by the way, but would benefit I think from a warmer eq. I would add that at the beginning of the song the lead guitar is perhaps a bit in your face. Overall though, this is a really cool and very creative song. Thanks!
 
Kevin

Thanks a bunch guys. It's appreciated

Just listened to the revised version...  sounds pretty good here!   No panning anomalies that I can hear - nicely balanced and mixed.    I really liked the chord changes, though they (and the lead fills) sound more like Steely Dan to me than a typical blues song IMO.  
 

Pretty well executed and the song flow and grooves.
 
Could do with a touch more dynamic in some places, seems fairly compressed?
 
Cian