Eko,MaxB & Lazarus- Eagle

Man, I really enjoyed this song. If anything, I'd like to see the 7/8 section explored a little more. Maybe a guitar lead over top of the synth lick. Very reminiscent of Genesis in the 'old days' . Anxious to see how this song developes. Well done!

Will keep an eye out for the development which should be interesting with a start like this.
 
Thanks for sharing.

I, too, like where this is going.  It's very creative and unpredictable.  The mix is sophisticated, and I think you're just a tweak or two away from a stellar song.  Perhaps, it's as little as playing with the relative volumes of the parts.  I'll be back later.

In that low register, it's difficult to understand/make out the vocals. I would consider pitching it up. It was easier when you went up and octive. But it seems like some things are competing with the vocal frequencies in the middle, maybe look at panning as well as perhaps some EQ treatment? 
 
I really like the piano, and the electric guitar, BGV, and your arrangement there at the CODA/Break, a bit of an Elton John vibe to me. But then the vox drop back in to the abyss.. Maybe you could modulate there?

Nice one eko. Only nits I can think of would be to tweak the soft voc parts with clip envelopes to soften some of the consenents. (t's and s's).

I enjoyed the song.  Really liked the instrumental breaks.  The backing Vox had a nice spread to them.  I think the lead Vox could use a little more air to them.  I thought they were too in my face, I thought they were good but just a little too up front for my taste.