Electronic/Step song.

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2012/02/25 05:06:58 (permalink)

Electronic/Step song.

It's my first time publishing an electronic song, so i'm not good at judging the amount of sub bass i put in. Hope it's okay.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YmUyNtQlbKs
post edited by SeveredVesper - 2012/02/25 08:07:37

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/25 10:46:57 (permalink)
    Well, it changes enough to not be boring like some electronika.  I DO understand that electronic music can be repetitive when you're on the dance floor so boring is relative.  Although you do change it up quite a bit I feel like something's missing.  I DON'T LISTEN TO MUCH OF THIS, so I am not a good judge.  I do think that your balance is fine and the sub bass isn't distorting or aggravating like some of the cars that pull up next to me at a red light.  LOL.  All in all I think this i well done. 

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/25 13:01:46 (permalink)
    Thanks for listening Warren! Atleast i'm a bit more rested with you saying the balance is fine. I quite agreee that it still could be added with stuff, but i'll just leave it be and just make better stuff next time (although this is admittedly a little minimalistic in terms of electronica). This my first try anyway.

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/25 15:03:22 (permalink)

    I like where this electronica music you created is going but what I'm hearing is too loud in the mix . I would lowered your bass and some of the other things going and then bring in behind all that something that would support whats going on right now .
    Painting a picture with a nice house in it is not enough , you need some interesting things going on behind the house if you want to make the whole picture interesting .
    Same with this type of music , too much bass and what you have going on now is good but you need balance and something behind your music to really make it great  .

    Just my opinion , you might think differently ,
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    post edited by radio - 2012/02/25 15:04:47

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/25 15:15:56 (permalink)
    Hi Back again , you might take a moment to listen to this great electronica artist .
    This guy has the best electronica music I have ever listened to , my future goal is to go after his sound .
     
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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/25 22:38:13 (permalink)
    Sounds like Electronica-Metal. Maybe you've created a new genre Miggy.

    I had no problems with it as I, like Warren, do not normally listen to this genre music.

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/26 12:19:09 (permalink)
    This song is very textured, and it caught my attention right away.  I love playing with synthesizers and beats, and you did more than just play.  You rocked.  You bass textures sound just fine on my speakers, and overall, I think the balance is fine.  After a few seconds of listening, I found my feet were moving to the rhythm.  You found my inner child.  Nice job.

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/26 12:26:34 (permalink)
    Sounds good here, some of the sub bass hangs a bit to in the face perhaps some automation.

    Overall it works, probably sound good in a club with a balanced sound system.

    Thanks for sharing

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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/26 14:11:14 (permalink)
    Not my genre either though I do like to listen to and play with it myself now and again.  This sounded really well done to me, and +1 if it was your first outting in electronica.
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    Re:Electronic/Step song. 2012/02/26 15:53:41 (permalink)
    1:10 and on is frickin sick man, love that stuff, kind of dub-step-ish.

    Man , you got a loud punchy mix right there.

    The starting synth @ 0:14 sounds to dry, mechanical and upfront for my taste however.

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