Guitarhacker
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Emerald Eyes
Here's a new guitar song...with a Latin flavor. It is guitar driven....with lots of harmony and stuff.... I actually composed this tune quite some time back but I had a difficult time trying to get very far with it.... I'd lay down some tracks, and not like them...delete and let it set. I decided to make it a guitar song and it seems to be working. 9 tracks... 5 of them are guitars so I could have the parts fit without overlapping. 2 are acoustic. Emerald Eyes Enjoy.... and comment. Gracias!
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 11:43:15
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Herb I can hear the Latin influence and could see Santana playing parts of this. Of course he would do it a ton faster in some areas. The only crit I have at all is the placement of the acoustic that is playing individual notes. It seems to be right on top of one of the leads. Very nice piece Ron
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 16:22:10
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Very nice stuff Herb. The opening note of the guitar sounds fuzzy / too distored. The guitar is very nice but maybe a touch less reverb or otherwise warm the track to bring it a little more to the front. Good composition - and you don't need lots of notes like Santana, form over quantity! Very melodic and meldoy is everything! Daryl
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 16:35:52
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very nice herb, but you've got the melody for a famous song in there, I can't remember it right now - that's going to bug me until I do remember what it is. but was that intentional?
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 16:58:35
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That was nice,i like it alot.I agree with rolifer@verizon.net about the acoustic guitars,otherwise a very nice piece,even my 13 year old son liked it.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 17:00:11
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Santana +1 Bass and keyboard sounds to midi can tell they are tracks from BIABOX song ++1
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 17:16:24
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Beagle let me know when you figure it out.... No...that was not intentional. Now to figure out what song...and just how close. If it's too close for comfort I will relegate it to the ash heap... .... It does have a familiar/classic tune to it. Or... is it just a tune that reminds you of a famous song. Or... is it a flash of brilliance and a new classic melody? Santana's Europa maybe? In the refrain...... I sure hope not.... I haven't heard Europa in some time..... EDIT: just listened to Europa.... that's not it.... but it's amazing .... Carlos plays a lot like me.... hummmmmmm
post edited by Guitarhacker - 2010/07/18 17:23:58
My website & music: www.herbhartley.com MC4/5/6/X1e.c, on a Custom DAW Focusrite Firewire Saffire Interface BMI/NSAI "Just as the blade chooses the warrior, so too, the song chooses the writer "
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 18:48:02
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Hi G.H. Great song..I even liked the tittle. Do you yet have vocals for it? I say this because your song relates to the music that I am familiar with, and all of them have lyrics...Not meaning to impose anything, though. I enjoyed it. It's very well done. Thank you for posting it.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 20:14:23
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It's beautiful Herb. I like it!
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 20:19:48
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thanks Janet.... NoKey... no lyrics totally instrumental.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 20:23:50
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Cool song and great playing, Herb. I think Santana comparisons are inevitable with this chord progression and your guitar tone but it's absolutely meant as a compliment! I always like your guitar harmonies.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 20:35:58
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Hey Herb, Sounds a little reminiscent of "This Masquerade", but it's not a quote. Great feel, very sweet melodically. I have to agree about the arpeggiated acoustic being a little distracting where it is in the mix. Seems a bit thin as well. I think you need a warmer sound there.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 20:42:47
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Really dig the chord progression. Lead guitar sounds just a tad brittle. I think the electric piano may be just a bit too present. Awesome playing my friend.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 21:41:38
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haha! this is funny! Sept 5, 2009 I posted a thread in the Coffee House and I posted a link to a soundclick song with a keyboard snippet of a melody that I had stuck in my head and couldn't figure out what it was. Gregy57 and KenB123 figured out it was "Hearts" by Marty Balin (former Jefferson Starship member). That's the same melody I'm hearing in your song!!! see if you think this is close to part of the melody of your song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSZITC4tEes it's not exactly the same and the tempo of yours is a lot slower, but it's close enough, I think - at least to remind me of this song!
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 22:03:13
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You never fail to amaze me... unless you are making it up knowing that we will not take the time to check....... Sept 5, 2009...... what's the matter, can't remember the time? That was a cool tune, it's similar but not close enough to have me sweating a phone call from a lawyer. I'll see if I can do a screen shot of the music for you.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 22:07:43
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LOL! 9:12AM!!! I searched the forum (via google) to find the thread before I posted! http://forum.cakewalk.com/tm.aspx?m=1810478&mpage=1&print=true anyway - it's not exactly the same, just similar enough to remind me of it I guess! oh - and I think I have already figured out that particular melody part on the keyboard...you're in they Key of Emaj, I beleive.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 22:49:11
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I'm not sure of the final key (the key written is the right one)......and the melody is not exact as you will see if you follow along. You won't believe the trouble I went through to get this sheet music posted.......
post edited by Guitarhacker - 2010/07/18 22:58:09
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 23:04:25
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hmm - definitely not Emaj - guess I'm hearing it wrong. but I'm confused - you're posting the melody of the pad, not the guitar - I was actually talking about the guitar part (starting at 0:10 but repeats throughout the song). is the guitar playing this part as well?
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 23:10:38
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Hi Herb I like this a lot, loving the tone on the melody. The acoustic playing the arps if anything need to occupy much more space and come up in volume it's but a thin tinkling distraction just now, like you're hiding it. (monitoring too loud when mixing I'll bet... ) The rest of the midi stuff sounds a little like filler just now as far as sounds go but it's all the right idea musically for a background to those sublime guitar sounds. Well played Sir!
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 23:12:40
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Yeah... if you follow the notes it is close to the melody of the refrain that appears throughout the song.... I did not play the melody as written exactly...... I took some liberty with it to make it more interesting and fun to play..... and expanded it a bit and took it to other places, coming back to the refrain as needed.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/18 23:16:38
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...removed....
post edited by Guitarhacker - 2010/07/19 08:30:11
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 00:16:02
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This is really, really sweet, Herb. The song is reminiscent of many songs but not to any one in particular. I think your progression is unique enough. Sounds like a definite latin (Carlos) progression with just a hint of Brazilian maybe Sergio Mendez? I really like the keys which give it that Marty Balin sound. I really enjoy all of your stuff. Such a wonderful variety but you always pack a nice unique expression to whatever style your dealing with.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 00:36:27
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Cool Tune.............. How did you record the Electric guitar parts............ Direct or mic'ed I'm always interested
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 07:59:41
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Kind words Tap.... Thanks , Unique and yet memorable riffs...... the goal of all guitarists.... Zungle... I generally use my POD2 (kidney bean). For this the volume and gain were about 4 or 5 most of the tone knobs, believe it or not were turned way down, model was Rectified with verb and a slap back. Gibson 69SG on neck pickup wide open with tone on 6. Direct into the Saffire interface.
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 08:24:39
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Solid performacen, no nits what so ever. good handling of the instruments, and tracking of them as well. The mix sounds pretty bang on target as well. Did I mention it sounds really good? :D /T
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 08:31:47
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My website & music: www.herbhartley.com MC4/5/6/X1e.c, on a Custom DAW Focusrite Firewire Saffire Interface BMI/NSAI "Just as the blade chooses the warrior, so too, the song chooses the writer "
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 09:43:49
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Hi Herb. Nice song. I love the guitar playing (as always!)...but the background sounds are a little elevator music-ish. They take the edge off too much IMO. (I would add some bongos. ...seems to be my favorite recommendation! I should try it.)
post edited by No How - 2010/07/19 15:26:25
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 10:57:12
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It is a bit of a stretch to classify this as "Latin". but it worked for me anyway. Tone is boss. +1 on acoustic Melody is evocative of something, i just can't place my finger on it....
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 14:24:08
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Herb, it's a lovely melody. I actually hear lots of different familiar snatches in it - which might be why I'm trying to sing along with it. Im just SAYIN'.... :)
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Re:Emerald Eyes
2010/07/19 15:13:08
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I enjoyed that Herb thanks for sharing, I could not find anything that was to far out that needed to be mentioned. Cool
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