LpMike75
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End of Watch
Hi guys - Long time no visit in here, I apologize :( Stopping in to share this piece I just released. After a co-worker of mine committed suicide 2 years ago, I wrote this song in an attempt to help heal and to hopefully bring awareness to PTSD and suicides among law enforcement. The song ended up being too personal and got buried in my personal music library. Recently I changed my mind and decided to finish it. Vocal performances by Tony Piacenta, Tuesday Elliott and Rhiannon Elliott. http://www.mjlmusic.com/end-of-watch/
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eph221
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/13 22:34:42
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I liked the song. The recording needs work (not sure if that matters). You're right about PTSD it's like the catch 22 of needing rest but not being able to sleep.
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LpMike75
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/15 14:24:10
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eph221-
Thank you for the listen. I'de be curious to hear what you would do differently with the recording.
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jamesg1213
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/15 14:54:17
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Beautiful song Michael. Very short, but very moving. I wouldn't change a thing.
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/15 14:59:40
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It is a wonderfully put together track with some great performances and counds. Lotsa good choices here.
But I have to agree with EPH221...I don't care for the mix. The piano needs just a hair more shine and the male vocal is so in your face it could stand a nice eq sculpting job.
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mgh
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/15 16:15:22
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mix sounds OK listening quietly on monitors. Love the harmony backing vocals. would like to hear more
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LpMike75
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/16 19:00:41
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Jamesg1213 - Thank you
Jamesyoyo - Thank you for the suggestion. I tried to keep the piano dark, but maybe it didn't translate well. Thank you as always for the feedback and suggestions
MGH - Thank you
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/17 08:57:45
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Well done performances, the mix sounds a little raw, but I don't think it takes anything away from the song. I was expecting more after the ending, but that's always a good thing, isn't it?
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/17 17:08:52
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/17 19:03:21
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You couldn't pay me enough to be a police officer in the current times and the environment they work in now. I have the utmost respect for what they do everyday to protect us. I'm very sorry for the loss of your friend.
The song is short but very intense. It emphasizes how they must put their faith in God every day they go out on the streets. Wonderful tribute to your friend and co workers.
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daryl1968
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/17 20:17:20
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nice song and performances Mike .....and a very worthy subject matter.
I like the subtlety of the mix but the lead vocal sounds slightly detached from the rest of the parts. Maybe roll some low end off?
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Bob Oister
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Re: End of Watch
2016/10/18 03:39:45
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Hi, Mike, Great to see you back around on the forum!  Beautiful job on this very tasteful, solemn piece with a sincere, heartfelt subject matter, which is especially important with the unfortunate recent events in our country. Condolences on the loss of your friend, I'm sure he appreciates this wonderful tribute. Best Wishes, Bob
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