garygml
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Jesse Screed
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/10 13:12:12
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Hey, thanks for sharing this.
I'm listening to this on headphones.
I like the guitar work and especially at 2:51.
I like that little lick 1:19 too, and the rhythm guitar that falls in behind it .
In my headphones the bass is a little boomy. Otherwise I think the mix is good, a nice airy quality to it.
I like your voice. I think that the vocals are a little hard to hear. Maybe they could be turned up or maybe a little less echo?
the arrangement seems good to me too.
Jesse
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emeraldsoul
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/10 21:12:39
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Cool, cool, cool.
I'd decrease the echo time just a hair on your slapbacky vocals. Love the tone of the vocal, however, really nice delivery. Song is a real nice jam. Guitar work is super clean, hits all the right spots.
well done!
-Tom
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ohgrant
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/10 21:42:40
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Really nicely crafted track great vox and guitar work
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audiomyth
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/11 07:31:34
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That's one really cool track. What is that wave like sound effect on the guitar in the beginning? It served a nice welcome effect.
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Kane
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Leizer
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/13 06:42:07
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Good mix, everything sounds very good and clear. Great guitar play, and you have a really good singing voice! I hear some U2 and REM here. My only crit is the refrain (and sorry if I'm too honest here, the rest of the song is great, so...)  : For me the melody is unnecessary simple. You sing a D on the D-chord, C on the C-chord and G on the G-chord. It sounds like there is an interesting choir part in the background, maybe raise it up? Good work!
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/19 15:30:59
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Nice song! The arrangement works well IMO and the parts are all solid. I particularly liked the "chimey" guitar tones.
Mix-wise I do agree about the slap-back on the vocal being a little heavy, although I do like the echo at the tail end of each line. Overall it's a nice clear mix though and everything seems in its place.
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/19 17:49:46
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Your vocals are really good and I do hear the U2 type vibe, albeit a more of a country backing. Bit long for me overall but real good work here
Cian
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garygml
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/23 02:20:10
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Cheers guys thanx for your input... Im taking in all suggestions & gonna do a remix later....kane the wave sound at the start is tremolo guitar from strum session
Cheers
Gary
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garygml
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/23 02:20:17
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Cheers guys thanx for your input... Im taking in all suggestions & gonna do a remix later....kane the wave sound at the start is tremolo guitar from strum session
Cheers
Gary
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kevinwal
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/23 09:44:41
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Really nice song with great vocals, you have great pipes! I like the echo effect but I'd use it sparingly to emphasize a phrase here and there. Really nice mix overall. Great work!
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daryl1968
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/23 13:39:28
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Great song and vocal Gary. Enjoyed that a lot.
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Mannynyagain
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/24 10:46:39
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Captured my interest in the first few bars. Love the clarity, simplicity and straightforward rock and roll honesty of this. Solid arrangement, terrific playing (guitars sounds are bell-like - love it) and singing as well. It's all good - congrats.
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ABull
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Re: Everyone Knows (New Track)
2015/11/26 22:48:50
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Hey, the mix and overall sound is very impressive and pleasing to the ears. My initial reaction in listening from a writer's viewpoint is that the song structure needs a bit of tightening -- the sections need more -- differentiation -- if that makes sense. More variation.
Other than that, vocals were spot on and the guitar sounds were nicely played. For some reason, I kept wanting to hear a tambourine tho. :)
Allan
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