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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/07 22:19:12
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hey eph, nice
I think you need to add a high trumpet to the first 23 sec and then again at 45 sec, it just seems it might fit with the attack of those other horns, like you did at 2:57. I think the tempo at 1:06 needs to be slowed down a bit. until 1:30. I would also revisit the intro sooner, say at 2:34, over what you have there already.
That what I got, nice ambitious piece.
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eph221
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/07 23:53:45
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Jesse, I am highly honored that you took the time to listen. I'll take your thoughts into consideration. There's also a really nasty violin patch in there that I have to nuke. Take Care!
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/08 07:51:47
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I couldn't begin to write something like this. Very nice mood piece, uplifting without being pushy about it. Nice stuff!
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/08 11:38:01
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excellent David - I really enjoyed this. I agree with Kevin above - very uplifting
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eph221
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/08 19:45:55
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Thanks Daryl! I think the kiss is just a peck in this instance. :D:D
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/08 21:25:57
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Very nice indeed David! Thanks for posting
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eph221
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/10 19:05:13
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eph221
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/13 16:13:59
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thanks for listening Freddy.
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/13 22:15:57
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Hey David - very interesting! your music has such different styles, you're very "versatile" in that!
I like the addition of the low horns at about 2 and the tension at about 2:35 and on. good stuff!
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eph221
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Re: Extended Version
2017/08/17 03:17:44
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Beagle! Thank you so much for listening!
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