tazman
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New Song... Simple
We just finished this song. It's a collaboration with two other SONAR users. It's at http://www.robertocerini.com/music.php on the Music page and can be streamed on the player. The song is titled "Simple". I hope you enjoy it.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/04 20:40:40
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I thought there was a little to much low in the vox at the start of a couple of syllables. Some more BGVs that went with the lead would be super with this song.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/04 20:53:00
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Good song here..... I was hoping the drums were coming in strong ...and they did...... this is a nice rock ballad..... Good playing..... and man... I like it.
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tazman
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 07:18:25
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I'll check on the low in the vox. Thanks, ORIGINAL: Venus
I thought there was a little to much low in the vox at the start of a couple of syllables. Some more BGVs that went with the lead would be super with this song.
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tazman
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 07:20:39
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I'm glad you like it. It was our first project together. We're starting on a new song, along the same style. I'll post it as soon as it's done. ORIGINAL: Guitarhacker
Good song here..... I was hoping the drums were coming in strong ...and they did...... this is a nice rock ballad..... Good playing..... and man... I like it.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 07:52:42
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Nice mix and song. Well done.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 08:45:22
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 09:53:43
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Cool website, great song, excellent playing and singing, good production...
My only crit would be the acoustic gtr tone, I'm hearing too much of the pickup...
Good work...
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 10:08:19
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Firstly, this is a good song. Nice pretty chords, good vocals, good guitar.
My only crits are with the drums.. not what they are doing but something with the tone.. too dry? Not sure--but something.
The only other thing, for me, is the sound of the electric piano.. maybe a little verb or eq is needed?
Very nice song.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 13:01:07
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Thanks guys for all the comments.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/05 13:24:44
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Overall, I'd say this sounds damn nice. One thing...during the quieter parts in the intro, I can sort of hear a gate close or the reverb on your vocal cut off... Just something I noticed that would sound a bit more natural if it carried through. I like what you've got going here. 
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/06 12:00:41
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Smooth and fluent on this Roberto. Good voice. Piano and organ bits sound nice. Yeah..sweet guitar harmonies.. Well put together.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/06 13:47:54
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/06 17:19:08
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I uploaded a new version with the "gate" sound fixed, I hope. It should sound much smoother now. ORIGINAL: RLD
Overall, I'd say this sounds damn nice.
One thing...during the quieter parts in the intro, I can sort of hear a gate close or the reverb on your vocal cut off...
Just something I noticed that would sound a bit more natural if it carried through.
I like what you've got going here.
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/07 02:07:17
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Nice song with a good sound. Vocals were kool and as the title suggests SIMPLE. Very nice song and production. Great work! John
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/07 04:20:47
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Hi.
Really nice song, the mix is great and all the individual parts sound really complimentary. I would agree with Pat in that the one thing that stood out for me as needing a little work was the drum tone. The toms sounded nice and full, but the cymbals/hats and snare sounded a little too "harsh". I think the snare needs a little more body to it so it fills the beat a little more.
Otherwise, great stuff!
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RE: New Song... Simple
2009/03/08 16:51:11
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Thanks, I'll see what I can do about the drums.
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Re: RE: New Song... Simple
2009/08/31 15:05:34
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