Need help with final verse !

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2010/07/19 13:54:16 (permalink)

Need help with final verse !

Hello: I am really stuck on finishing out with a last verse of this song... here are some of the previous versus (and one sample of the chorus),

Main theme of song: I will be here for you!!! (a song of friendship and support)

Verse 1:

If the sun isn't shining for your morning, and things are going your way
and you need a friend, or a warm place to hide yourself away....

Chorus:

Just come this way and be with me, we'll figure out what you need
I'll always be there for you, to help you deal with the crazy world...crazy world...


Perhaps someone can give me some ideas or an inspiration for a last verse...
 
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    Re:Need help with final verse ! 2010/07/19 14:17:46 (permalink)
    When the night is dark and closing in with fingers velvet black
    I'll bring you stars, I'll bring the moon, to light your pathway back.

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    silvercn
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    Re:Need help with final verse ! 2010/08/05 02:59:38 (permalink)
    Thanks julibee ! I wish others would have responded as well. I may well use these lines or a close version. I must not have set this up to get a respone, sorry it took me so long to return to this forum and find it.
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