"Prudence In Flames" - Mix opinions please

Hi -
 
Interested in people's opinions on what needs attention in this jazzy/theatrical piece - sax, piano, organ, acoustic bass, trumpets etc. Had some issues in earlier versions getting the mids to sit and play nicely with each other...
 
Love to know what you think works and what doesn't.
 
Prudence In Flames
 
Cheers!
 
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