New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty)

Author
Post
Essentials Only Full Version
fHumble fHingaz
Max Output Level: -87 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 182
  • Joined: 2009/01/19 19:19:58
  • Status: offline
2010/08/03 08:14:04 (permalink)

New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty)

Hi all... keen to hear opinions on this tune - its called "Too Much"... thanks in advance for listening & commenting!
[link=http://soundcloud.com/fhumble-fhinga...gaz/too-much-2]http://soundcloud.com/fhu...hinga...gaz/too-much-2[/link]

If that one doesn't work, try this: [link=http://www.4shared.com/audio/dDxeZOGh/Too_Much_2.html]http://www.4shared.com/au...xeZOGh/Too_Much_2.html[/link]

https://fytakyte.bandcamp.com/
https://soundcloud.com/coldroom-studio
 
 
#1

9 Replies Related Threads
    geetsifly
    Max Output Level: -87 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 192
    • Joined: 2008/10/17 23:33:53
    • Location: an undisclosed location outside Chicago
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/03 18:12:15 (permalink)
    Hi I like the vibe of this tune. This mix was nice. I enjoyed the clarity of it. The various elements were all very present. The only criticism I can offer is in the bass line during the verses. Its dead on with the snare but it makes the bass feel ahead of the beat. You might try thumping eighths or little transitional notes between the long notes. Honest though its a nice tune and I'm just being picky bass player ;)

    George
    post edited by geetsifly - 2010/08/03 18:18:29

    Sonar Platinum / Windows 7 64 SP1 / Intel I7 / 12GB ram / RME Hammerfall 9632 Interface / BCF2000 Control Surface
    Lets connect on facebook: http://www.facebook.com/geetsifly or Reverbnation: http://www.reverbnation.com/geetsifly
    #2
    fHumble fHingaz
    Max Output Level: -87 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 182
    • Joined: 2009/01/19 19:19:58
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/03 20:18:33 (permalink)
    geetsifly


    Hi I like the vibe of this tune. This mix was nice. I enjoyed the clarity of it. The various elements were all very present. The only criticism I can offer is in the bass line during the verses. Its dead on with the snare but it makes the bass feel ahead of the beat. You might try thumping eighths or little transitional notes between the long notes. Honest though its a nice tune and I'm just being picky bass player ;)

    George


    Thanks for listening & commenting, George... I experimented with the thumping eights idea you mentioned for the bass part in the verse while I was recording the track, but it just didn't seem to fit well... the transitional notes might be good though... thanks.

    https://fytakyte.bandcamp.com/
    https://soundcloud.com/coldroom-studio
     
     
    #3
    peggysuechan
    Max Output Level: -79 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 581
    • Joined: 2007/05/20 11:06:04
    • Location: South Houston TX
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/06 03:39:36 (permalink)
    Sounds very professionally done.  Verses and choruses are excellent. You have a nice way of finishing them, everything stopping while you sing the endings for effect. 

    This is not my genre, never has been (we're talking dork here), so I can't give you much feedback. I only know that it sounds as good as what I hear at the gymn over their P.A, or whatever that thing is that we have to listen to there.

    If I'm practicing a sin, I'm going to Hell.
    If I'm obeying Jesus, I'm going to Heaven. 

    SusieChan.com
    #4
    equality
    Max Output Level: -76 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 716
    • Joined: 2007/01/20 19:55:57
    • Location: Sweden
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/06 04:57:30 (permalink)
    Cool, pro sounding tune. I like the stops as well. Great playing. I have no nits at all.
    #5
    Janet
    Max Output Level: 0 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 8094
    • Joined: 2010/01/02 19:04:11
    • Location: Missouri
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/07 16:57:19 (permalink)
    Wow--nice!  Vocals seem just right--easy to hear AND well-done.  Love the arrangement.  The intro was really cool, swirling in the way it did.  Great song!

    My Soundclick Page

    http://www.reverbnation.com/prairiebreeze
     

    #6
    BIABDude
    Max Output Level: -77 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 676
    • Joined: 2010/01/24 20:32:32
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/07 18:03:24 (permalink)
    song + + + + 1
    lead vocal to dry
    #7
    savageopera
    Max Output Level: -78 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 625
    • Joined: 2008/04/01 23:26:15
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/07 22:55:09 (permalink)
    Excellent job Mr. fHumble fHingaz(did I pronounce it correctly?).  Great song all around.  Nice flow, dynamics, and arrangement.  Maybe only to my ears but it feels like a late sixties tune.  Brings Johnny Rivers to mind. That's a compliment, by the way.  Solid mix but I would like to hear the vox nudged up ever so slightly.......this is a winner..........Ron

    Sonar Artist, HP Laptop, AMD A8700 , 1T+250g, M-Audio Fast Track Ultra ,Roland 88 Hammer action, Roland AX-1, M-audio 88es, Arturia minilabII......When I was young I wanted to become a mad scientist. I achieved everything except the "scientist" part....http://www.soundclick.com/savageopera
    #8
    karalie7@aol.com
    Max Output Level: -76 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 712
    • Joined: 2007/12/01 22:14:26
    • Location: Portland, Oregon
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/08 02:05:27 (permalink)
    Hi there, the mix is very good and I like where the vocal is in the mix. The drumming, guitar and vocal are good. I like the changes in the song. Quality production here. Blessings!

    IJenNeh 
    http://ijenneh.wordpress.com/
    http://youtube.com/ijenneh
    http://www.soundclick.com/ijenneh  
    http://www.facebook.com/ijennehreggae




    #9
    fHumble fHingaz
    Max Output Level: -87 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 182
    • Joined: 2009/01/19 19:19:58
    • Status: offline
    Re:New tune "Too Much" (Dark-Themed Ditty) 2010/08/08 17:38:11 (permalink)
    Thanks for taking the time to listen & comment.

    https://fytakyte.bandcamp.com/
    https://soundcloud.com/coldroom-studio
     
     
    #10
    Jump to:
    © 2024 APG vNext Commercial Version 5.1