Como un gorrion (Like a sparrow)

The timing is off to the point of sounding out of tune.
I don't like the instruments you use in the intro.  They sound so midi-ish.  
I could never figure out what the piano line was trying to do. It just didn't sound in sync with the organ.
The organ kept cutting off abruptly instead of fading naturally.
That ending instrument was ugly and midi-sounding.
Pleasing melody.
Your voice was the best thing. You sang with such passion, it made the song worth listening to, no matter the quality.

I'm not good at sequencing myself, so I can't help you with any tips, can't tell you how to correct anything. I mostly just plug and play, piano and stringpad. Unimaginative, I know.

But keep on. You've got a good idea in mind here. We can hear it trying to form. It's just not there yet.

I just listened to your Como un Lunar Cha Cha version, and it was fantastic. Then I listened to your non-Cha Cha version, and there was that timing problem again. And it seemed to flounder and not know where it was going or what it was supposed to be playing.

But your Cha Cha version was absolutely superb. Except the organ gets warbled somewhere there in the middle in a short solo. Everything else is tight, confident-sounding, and powerful. 

I can't figure out, though, why there would be such a discrepancy in your music. Same artist, same talent, right? And yet, there's a world of difference in the quality of the Cha Cha versus your other songs. 

I can't tell you where that organ gets warbly, by the way, because Chrome isn't allowing your pop-up player to open in my browser window so I can see the time.

Thanks good people.

I have been working precisely on the problem of fluidity in the sound modules.

I have been overcooking my setup with  a little too much of ingredients, I think.

I am currently re-doing the whole setup, before I try again.

Hi everyone, again, and thanks for the good points you added, Ron.

I have replaced the song with a completely re-done one.

I hope it does sound less MIDIsh, has better timing, and improved vocals. I am still using the free Proteus VX mainly, though but it seems to have more fluidity now, and I hope better overall sound quality. Hardware also is still the same. Modest laptop with an Audigy 2 Zs card.

I checked all settings of softwares, and found some bad ones that I believe have corrected.

I would appreciate view and critique on whether or not there is improvement in line with the comments made (which I value highly) for this self-imposed learning task that I find interesting, and, though difficult, much enjoyable. Also, of course, any new comments are most welcome, as I want to do all I can improve.

Song location is the same:

http://www.soundclick.com...857&songID=9484507

Thanks everyone, again!