Jessica & Rapture
Hey, my name's Joey. I'm an 18 year old songwriter from England.
I've never posted any of my work on here before so be nice!
I recently recorded 2 songs I wrote using Sonar and uploaded them to myspace.
The first one "Jessica" is about a boy who's in love with girl but he takes it too far to the point of it being funny and rather creepy. It's a love song gone wrong.
The second one "Rapture" is heavily based on the videogame Bioshock. If you've played the game you should notice many lyrical references.
I'm looking for comments about the songwriting and performance rather than the production as this is my very first time recording my own work.
Everything you hear is done by me, I played all the instruments, wrote all the parts, sang all the words and produced it all.
There are mistakes and things I would change if I recorded them again but it's all about learning!
Again I would like to stress that I've never produced before.
Here's the link, enjoy!!!
http://www.myspace.com/joeyvanzetti
post edited by JoeyVanzetti - 2010/08/04 20:26:48