Link works, now.
You want mix/production feedback. Well, all I can write are my impressions:
Yes Private sounds tinny somehow. So much so I'm even thinking I'm hearing steel drums. At 2:20 it started getting nice with the fuller harmony.
Right afterward, the speaking starts. Isn't that a little long for him to wait to come in? It's not like anything profoundly interesting was happening to entertain us while we waited.
That was some theatrical voice, there, barking out the fight speech.
The vocals were interesting. They fit with the scheme of the song, too.
The ending was your prettiest part.
Golden Sun sounds like someone tinkering in the kitchen, baking something, to a guitar intro. The guitars sound great. It sounds like this for the entire song. I guess it's a sketch that you're going to build later. But it sounds clear as crystal from my end. I heard every noise (that kitchen tinkering) clearly. They were interesting noises, at least. And I felt they were happening right in my face, so clear they were.
Okay, maybe the noise was more like setting up a tent.
post edited by peggysuechan - 2010/08/15 00:26:59