chrisby
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/10 07:48:18
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Loved it. Guitar solo was awesome. Wouldn't change a thing.
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chrisby
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/10 14:03:20
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Venus
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/10 16:03:10
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When I see ABG, I think Arterial Blood Gas. Medical jargon. I really like your verse melody and the melodrama ambience of the overall composition. Breaks seemed a lil long to me, but that's personal preference type thing. Cute lyrics.
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/10 16:36:22
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I'm liking this. There's an interesting dynamic that developes between the vocal and the chords being played. +1 to Venus' comment on the lyrics. Personally I thought the vocal could have been out front a little more, but that may have been listening conditions at the time I took it in. Nice job, man!
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chrisby
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/10 16:53:47
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Venus
When I see ABG, I think Arterial Blood Gas. Medical jargon. I really like your verse melody and the melodrama ambience of the overall composition. Breaks seemed a lil long to me, but that's personal preference type thing. Cute lyrics.
ABG huh, hmm, not so good. Well it was named with about 15 seconds of thought so maybe I'll have to rethink that. Anyway... thanks for checking it out and commenting. I tend to agree about the breaks being long. Not so much that they're long but more that they are a bit slow. Sounds like an excuse but basically I got stuck with it the way it is. Without going into a lot of detail sonar lost a bunch of my project midi data midway through and I could either start almost over from scratch or live with where it is so... As for the lyrics, cute as in good or cute as in annoying? Could go ether way I guess, maybe a little too melodramtic? Thanks, again...
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chrisby
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/10 16:57:04
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philz
I'm liking this. There's an interesting dynamic that developes between the vocal and the chords being played. +1 to Venus' comment on the lyrics. Personally I thought the vocal could have been out front a little more, but that may have been listening conditions at the time I took it in. Nice job, man!
Hi Philz, thanks for checking it out. Yeah, I did experiment with the vocal a bit. On some speaker systems it seemed to far back on others too far out front. I haven't really finished a lot of songs until just lately so still muddling through the mixing learning curve. Thanks again for the input, it all helps to find out where I'm on or off track!
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chrisby
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/11 20:31:50
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Hi James, Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to comment.... glad you liked it!
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/11 23:20:13
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Interesting! Love the Howler mic-thingy you did the vox for the breakdown with. I think there's just one too many out-of-key chords, but I think it definitely fits the feeling you were going for! Reminds me of a really really early Wheezer demo or something. Nice job, man! From what I can tell (even though I have little experience) the mix is great.
" Sing a new song to the Lord, for he has done wonderful deeds. His right hand has won a mighty victory; his holy arm has shown his saving power!" - Psalm 98:1 My music: Nick Marsella @ Reverbnation
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Re:New lofi/indiepop thing
2010/11/12 06:59:37
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SnyderTrigger
Interesting! Love the Howler mic-thingy you did the vox for the breakdown with. I think there's just one too many out-of-key chords, but I think it definitely fits the feeling you were going for! Reminds me of a really really early Wheezer demo or something. Nice job, man! From what I can tell (even though I have little experience) the mix is great.
Thanks for the comments... every bit of input is appreciated.
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