New Pop/electro song - Citizen of the Cosmos

Hi Whack,
              Enjoyed listening to this.
It had a kind of Culture Club vibe to it for me.
Listening in the cans , the  mix sounded good.
I liked the vocal treatments.

whack




Any other comments welcome, you can even tell me if you hate it! (be gentle!)

Cian

Well, it does suck....
Seriously, I like what you have done with this since I heard that raw version a few weeks back.  The tune really moves along nicely, and like Strat said, the vocal treatments work pretty well (except for a few small spots).


Production-wise, it rather lifeless and flat.  There should be a dramatic use of dynamics when the synths come in on the chorus, but it just kinda put out there without any fanfare. The bass needs a Multiband comp on it, cuz it is really dominating as opposed to where it should be, sliding under the groove and propelling the song.


You do have a way with the catchy melody!

I liked it.


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1/2 oz triple sec
1/2 oz Rose's® lime juice
1/2 oz cranberry juice

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Ya see that the most depressing thing about this it that I have put ozone 4 on the master bus, Im using a preset "4 band master - warm mids" on it which I though would be ok. I usually work by allowing all tracks routed to the master to hit the -6 to -3db level before adding this plugin to what I reckon sounds ok after. Just can seem to get the punch in these hard hitting dance/rock tracks which forces me to record soppy acoustic s**t all the time!!

Cian

This is cool Cian , I can almost picture this little yellow bubble space ship with a kid and his dog venturing off onto some type of space journey .
You know one of those Space Kid movies , very nice I enjoyed the vocals and vibe .

Radio

savage opera, thanks for you words. I know but that 10 % is what you need for people to bloody listen, the market im going for (20 year olds,facebook etc) generally listen to rihanna, usher and xfactor stuff, need the punch man. My younger bro even said the other day he said "This song is good but I just can listen to it its not loud enough", that song was something by the beatles/or eagles if I can remember and I recall he had spent the last week listening to the new usher album.

radio glad you liked it.dog?now there is an image that I could use, thats fun man.

mgh, I might just do that....if I can get my hands on him.mmm, interesting about the guitar solo, the start of the solo is a little harsh and the tone a little off but I love that solo part, I think it will have to stay!