{Track} Absynth Makes the Heart Grow Fonder

I posted a new track today. I'd be interest in any feedback from anyone who'd like to give it a listen.
 
Absynth Makes the Heart Grow Fonder
 
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Thanks in advance for any comments/feedback
 
 
Max the Cat

Thanks for the listen and the feedback, much appreciated. I think something happen in the conversion to MP3, it didn't sound scratchy before that, I'll have to go back and check. Thanks again!

very intresting composition....

the language took me by complete suprise.....cool once you get used to hearing it....I loved the quality of her voice!.....you may want to go back and have a listen to that MP3 cause it seems like it chopped her vocal entrances a few times.....or maybe if you have them compressed your threshold is set too low....

Or maybe it is the program you are converting your waves into mp3's....Like I cannot convert mine in Sonar it chops them up and does all kind of strange things so I will render a 16 bit wav file from Ozone and then import it into Audacity and convert it there to mp3 and we're good to go.....try that ...

the section for the guitar solo is very different than the other sections of the composition...took me by suprise and what ever it is that is chopping things did that on the guitar entrance which made it sound like a very rough entrance.....

the more I write the more I kind of think that is the issue..the conversion.....

but I did like the work itself!

Clifford

Thanks for the listen Trucker. I've pulled the song down till I can work out the mp3 issue which seems to be causing issues. Thanks again for listening and the feedback.