Private Lessons online ?

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gonna find out of this web site works -

anyone here every try it -

click through my profile  -- see any typos?



don't forget the review page and others too - >> http://www.privatelessons.com/DAYPOINT/media/editreviews.asp?mode=view&userid=9826

I don't see any typos here. 

But the site could use a bit bigger fonts somehow...I was having to use zoom on it as I got rather miserable eyesight .

Good layout..lots of space that can be utilized...

BTW..who are you having as your webhost?

trimph1


I don't see any typos here. 

But the site could use a bit bigger fonts somehow...I was having to use zoom on it as I got rather miserable eyesight .

Good layout..lots of space that can be utilized...

BTW..who are you having as your webhost?

its privatelessons.com 


I sighned up to their web site - they advertise for me 




I don't know who they use for a web host  - 


I dunno if I'll get any students from it either -- but giving it a shot - it was 100 bucks for one year 

philz


Paul Studied 17 different instruments

Should be a lower case 's' in studied.

+1 for larger fonts.

fixed 




thanks Philz 

well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Mooch4056



I dunno if I'll get any students from it either -- but giving it a shot - it was 100 bucks for one year 

We have a friend who teaches harp over the internet and has done pretty well with it.  It took a while to build up her client list, but seems to have a good momentum now.  Good luck!

rsp@odyssey.net

Beagle


well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Gotta disagree with you here Reece. It's a common practice for editors to correct and edit submissions. As long as there is no skewing of the intent of the message, I think they need to do a little corrective editing. It can also help the grammatically challenged appear less so.
 
Randy

ok - in that case there are a few errors. 
 
extraneous comma after "parents,"
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd (there should be 2 spaces between sentences).
extra space after period of 2nd sentence and quote mark
 
2nd one:
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd.
extraneous comma after "music,"
 
3rd one:
completely false and incorrect statement (and there's an extra space after the "!" before the end quote).
 
picture:  too ugly
 
seriously on the picture, tho, your face is distorted like the software for the upload of the pic re-sized your picture and it's wider than it used to be.
 
most important problem:
no mention of becan or bapu.

There ya go, Paul.    Nice. 

I agree about the bigger font. WAY bigger....this needs to stand out...fill up the page sorta. 

All the best!!

lol , good luck Mooch

Beagle

rsp@odyssey.net

Beagle


well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Gotta disagree with you here Reece. It's a common practice for editors to correct and edit submissions. As long as there is no skewing of the intent of the message, I think they need to do a little corrective editing. It can also help the grammatically challenged appear less so.
 
Randy

ok - in that case there are a few errors. 
 
extraneous comma after "parents,"
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd (there should be 2 spaces between sentences).
extra space after period of 2nd sentence and quote mark
 
2nd one:
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd.
extraneous comma after "music,"
 
3rd one:
completely false and incorrect statement (and there's an extra space after the "!" before the end quote).
 
picture:  too ugly
 
seriously on the picture, tho, your face is distorted like the software for the upload of the pic re-sized your picture and it's wider than it used to be.
 
most important problem:
no mention of becan or bapu.

Reece, I couldn't help but notice a few errors in your post. Mostly, the lack of proper capitalization. It may seem minor, but consider this. It's the difference between: Helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your uncle jack off a horse.
Something to ponder my friend.
 
Randy

its privatelessons.com

Why is that not seeming like a surprise?

Does it have a sister site?

largechests.com

They should stick out as a pair.



btw Where is the seedy web cam page?

Bapu, answer me straight, was this your idea?

I'd like to participate in this thread, but I have chores to do.  I'll be throwing the cow over the fence some hay.