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7-string_guy
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2011/01/27 18:18:04 (permalink)

a couple new ones

I moved my songs here :

www.reverbnation.com/enemyofearth

still i would like some feedback on "Justone"

thanks


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    ruralrocker2010
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    Re:a couple new ones 2011/01/27 22:43:49 (permalink)
    The song overall has a boxy/mechanical feel

    Can't really hear the mix on this laptop, so I can't comment on that. 

    In the lower part of your register you have less control and you have pitchy/nasally notes. REALLY focus when you sing down there so you can keep your chords in tune.

    The high part is GREAT! Is it double tracked? Doesn't sound like it is, you should definitely double track if you didn't. 

    Other than that, I thought it was an fairly interesting and well written song. It's one of those you've got to experience a couple of times. It's not a listen once kind of song.

    Good work.

    Joshua Barnes
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