Brand New Redneck Tune

Here is my latest tune.
 
I decided to write a song from the heart, for once. Over the years I have been writing "what they want", and still just got songs published to sit there and collect dust. So, having said that, this is my song. I played all instruments, vocals, mixed and mastered it here in my bedroom. Any feedback will be great! (Positive or Negative)
 
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=9364407&q=hi
 

Thanks a lot!

The only problem is, this is my natural voice. If I cut twang out, I would have to fake the whole song like an actor. It would be impossible or really hard to do during an entire show. All of the so called country people in Nashville now are from Canada, LA, New York, but not from the country like me.

This is the real deal.

Thanks a lot.

I rewrote a couple of lines and mixed it again tonight.

VERY COOL SONG! I can relate. Loved it!

Thanks a lot!

I wanted it to sound like a stage. Distortion guitar left and acoustic strumming on the right. Does it sound strange? Should I put a distorted guitar on the right also?

Thanks!

I will remix it tomorrow and see how it sounds, then upload it again.

Thanks a ton!

I remixed it again and moved some guitars more center, but not totally.

First, not my style of music, but I enjoyed this.  Maybe cause it was kind of rock for a country tune?  It just had a nice vibe.

As for the mix, Sounded a bit harsh in the high end to me, especially on the right speaker.   Also felt light to me in the low end, but maybe that's ok in this genre (I'm not an expert).

Overall good job though.

Telewanger


Thanks a lot!

The only problem is, this is my natural voice. If I cut twang out, I would have to fake the whole song like an actor. It would be impossible or really hard to do during an entire show. All of the so called country people in Nashville now are from Canada, LA, New York, but not from the country like me.

This is the real deal.

I personally don't consider this country, you'd have to go back a few more decades style wise for me to consider it the real deal, but it's a great song none the less, I could hear it on the radio!

:)

not my style...but cool tune..funny thing I was goin to say the same thing as Clifford and the vox twang...but hey if its u...let her fly!!..

cool song!

I love any kind of music. I will not play in a rock band, or blues band, or whatever. I will only play in a variety band. Anything from country to metal and anything in between is good for me. I get too bored playing one type of thing. It kills me.

Thanks,

I really appreciate it!

Very nice dynamics and production on this one.  The only thing I thought was to add just a touch more beef (low or low-mids) to the snare/kick.  But that is me, it still sounds great the way it sits.

Very well done.

Thanks for sharing,
Tom

Thanks!

I really appreciate it!