Rough mix

nice tune initially, but the middle is completely out of whack with the first part of the tune! almost like you have shoehorned 3 different tracks together here! i mean i like to add different dynamics in my stuff, but not as 180 degrees as this!
mix as currently is is nicely spaced and balanced, but i feel it's too toppy at the mo, can't really feel the bass, and there's almost a hole in the low-mids. Of course, i don't know what else is to be added, and i'm guessing you have a lot of mix and master plugs to slap on.

Thanks for the comments.

I didn't record/arrange the song - I'm just mixing.

Yeah, I have to raise the volume and compress/limit/eq the side instruments a lot more. I can't at the moment because I am getting blue screens of death every time I open the file :( Otherwise, these things would have already been fixed :(((

I am getting a new computer tomorrow and I'm going to reinstall everything. I made a post about my computer going slower and slower and I thought maybe it was because I was running too many plugins. Nope. Turns out, my ram/harddrive have slowly been dying this week. Now I get blue screens every time I do anything sophisticated. Makes mixing kind of hard :(

I see what I think they are "trying" to do. But they are missing the tight drummer who can make slow grooves become a psychadelic punk thrash....so they just do a **** and then start fast....

Mix seems find to me, but I would definitely counsel them to drop the vocal over-dubs. They are just bad.

Now that I have new monitors, I finally got a chance to make all the changes I wanted to make. The link at the top of the page goes to the newer version.