A waltz for Penny

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2011/02/20 20:59:40 (permalink)

A waltz for Penny

 Penny was my neighbor and best friend when I was about 5 years old. She was 2 years older than me and she used to teach me all kinds of staff, like riding a bike, whistling or how to tie my shoe laces. But her biggest achievement was teaching me how to dance the waltz.
 When she was nine, she was killed by a drunken motor biker, while trying to cross the street. This was one of the biggest shocks I've ever had in my life till now.

I never forgot Penny, and here's a waltz I wrote for her. That song got me into the semi finals at the 2010 UK songwriting contest.

http://soundcloud.com/ioa...stis/a-waltz-for-penny

sincerely,

Ioannis

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    Janet
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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/20 21:42:46 (permalink)
    I can see why this got you to the semi-finals.  Very very nice.  Great singing and lovely playing.  What wind instrument is that at :55.  Very nice!  Beautiful tune.  Sorry about your friend.  So sad. 
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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/20 21:50:10 (permalink)
    song-performance + + + +1 - - - excellent vocals and harmonies
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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/20 22:02:41 (permalink)
    It's a touching story, sad... 

    You have a problem there with string noise on your slides between chords. "squeaks" Some are pretty dramatic :-( I would recommend trying to tame the transients somehow. 

    Right at 1:53 it seems like that woodwind hits a note that's not in the scale? It's only for a fraction of a second, and it's low in the mix. What is that? A bassoon? 

    The song is lovely.

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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/20 22:49:54 (permalink)
    Thanks a lot guys. I appreciate the good words!

    Janet: that's a bass clarinet, one of my all time favorite instuments.

    Robby: a) you are right about the crackles and fret noises, they are are extremely loud, but i wanted to preserve every single flaw of the recordings. I did do an alternative mix prior to this one, reducing all those fret noises and the noises in the vocals,  but the song lost more than it actually gained. I never wanted to treat this song as a pop track.
                b) What do you mean out of scale? do you mean wrong note?
                c) I know the bass clarinet it's low in the mix, originally it was supposed to be just the guitar and the main vocal. Later on I added the backing vocal and the bass clarinet only as small helpers, but I didn't want them to stick out in the mix.

    post edited by giankap - 2011/02/20 22:56:13

    sincerely,

    Ioannis

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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/20 23:26:49 (permalink)
    out of scale = wrong note. I like it low in the mix, I wasn't commenting on that, I was commenting that it's very difficult to hear the note to which I'm referring, and I may even be wrong? Check it out :-) Right at 1:53

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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/21 07:09:23 (permalink)
    rockinrobby


    out of scale = wrong note. I like it low in the mix, I wasn't commenting on that, I was commenting that it's very difficult to hear the note to which I'm referring, and I may even be wrong? Check it out :-) Right at 1:53


    yes it's low in the mix but it's not a wrong note. the chord played by the guitar is a D and the note played by the bass clarinet is A which belongs to the scale.

    sincerely,

    Ioannis

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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/21 11:38:22 (permalink)
    Hi Ioannis, beautiful song. Like the guitar and what's a little string squeak  between friends , that bass-clarinet adds a beautiful melancholic quality to the song .

    Greetings, Rik
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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/21 18:17:28 (permalink)
    thank you very much Rik!

    sincerely,

    Ioannis

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    Re:A waltz for Penny 2011/02/21 18:28:37 (permalink)
    Yeah that would be the major 5th :-) Which reminds me? I think I'm going to bust in to a major 5th of my own!

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