The River

I always enjoy sharing my songs on the forum. Here is one I did this week.

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7402495

First time I've posted from ReverbNation so I'm not sure what the view is among forum members. Always appreciate your listens and whatever feedback is offered up.

Sykes

Hi Paulo. Thanks for the listen. I think I agree with you about that specific drum loop. I haven't liked it much so far either. 

I wrote this song a long time ago and can't sing it in the higher way I used to so I delivered it in a lower register, which may have took my focus away from delivering the lines.

I'll take a look at those areas.

Thanks again.

Thanks so much for your encouraging reply. The main chord is an Amaj13 played as a triad with open A on 5th string and then the C# on 4th string at 11th fret to start the triad. So it is way up there.  The other main chord is a G#m7.


I have always liked this song because it was a hopeful song and at that time I was writing mostly downers.
I just began playing bass in the last couple of years and I am working on establishing a groove as opposed to my first inclination which is to noodle.

I will probably give the vox another shot next week. 

Thanks again for listening.