Thanks so much,   I really appreciate the repeated listens and all the comments from everyone.   A fresh persepective can be so handy after listening to the same  song for 8 hours.

I might make one or two more small changes, once my back starts feeling better and I can get back in the studio, but I think this bad boy is about ready to start shopping around with.

I really think this is one of my best if not the best breakbeat song I've done so far.   I think a combination of better gear, more experience, and plenty of feedback really took this to the next level.

Now I just actually need to make some money on it, lol.   That's the real hard part.

Nice Job Well done.. Top notch.

You begin with the love and move on to survival. It's not about making a deal anymore, it's the deal you make. I've been lucky mostly, worked hard secondly, been falling on my arse more times than I can count but kept delivering, and to make sure I can pay my bills I work in this post and dubbing studio because making music isn't neccesarily paying off. Although, sometimes it does but I never know if it will continue to do so.

Playing music in front of people, now that's a different story;)

However, just keep at it and work with your tracks like you have with this one - make the next one even better - and keep pushing your tunes to the right people and you'll never know. And by experience I will advice you to never underestimate the power of a sync lisensing. Selling the track on beatport will pay a little - but having it in commercial or movie will finance a week of music making for you - or more

Ok, made some last changes on the first part of the song.

changed some vocal samples, and some vocal timings, also a bit of pitch issues.   IMHO, really helped pull the first half (or really 3rd) together.

I promise I won't make any more changes

(or will I?)

Kroneborge

(or will I?)

You've been spending too much time in the Coffee House


I can't put my finger on what you've changed, but this version seems, somehow, more focused and tighter.

This isn't my first choice genre, but it is an enjoyable listen.
I like it.

Janet


Honestly, I can't remember exactly what it sounded like before.  But this sure sounds good.  :)

Thanks for the extra listen Janet,

most of the changes are pretty small.   Just a bit of vocal switches at the beggining.  I thought they were holding the first half back.