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Here's My first rough sketch of my newest work in progress.. Lots of work ahead.. Thanks for Listening .. http://snd.sc/dDYmMV
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evadianepug
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You know, if I was at a dance club with the lights going and people all around, this would be great. Sitting here, listening, There's not enough going on. You wouldn't notice that if you are dancing probably. I know there's more to come and I'd like to hear the additions. The production is really good, just sparse. I'll be looking for the finished product.
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lhansen
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I gave it a listen, tho I have to admit I don't listen much to this genre, so my understanding isn't up to par here.
I think it's a good 'foundation' and the sparsness allowed me to hear pretty much every nuance. You did say a WIP, so, like to see where you're heading with this as well.
There's more room to add on, maybe some melody lines, a catchy hook, but, that's just me and you had something in mind when creating this piece.
It is played & recorded well IMO.
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djjhart@aol.com
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Thanks for the comments Guys .. alot more work has been done onto that track from whats posted. I should have it completed by weeks end.
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Lynn
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I've heard it said many times that you have maybe 10 to 15 seconds to capture your audience's attention, and this lost mine right away. Nothing wrong with the mix,per se, but it takes a long time to develope, IMO. This could stand to be trimmed a bit, and perhaps a second riff could be inserted to give it a lift. I'll be interested to hear the completed version.
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