She Reeled Me In

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2011/04/27 23:35:58 (permalink)

She Reeled Me In

Been away a while. Writer's block, I guess.
Anyway, this was written several years ago and I didn't like how it flowed so I put it on the back burner. I got inspired the other day and I think it turned out real well. Always knew it had potential.
Recording went very well too. I had just about given up recording. Even the Harp part turned out wel for a guy who doesn't play harp, I think.
Tell me what you guys think. Constructive criticism always appreciated.
 
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10563835&q=hi&newref=1

Bob


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=793873&content=music

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    Re:She Reeled Me In 2011/04/28 08:48:26 (permalink)
    This is a mighty fine song.  Very catchy lyric.
    I think there's a couple minor mix issues and they're probably subjective, but maybe less reverb on vocal, maybe another guitar ever so subtly just to bring a little snap to the rhythm...small stuff....
    very nice song!

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    hrtfxr
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    Re:She Reeled Me In 2011/04/28 16:08:57 (permalink)
    Thanks for your kind words.
    I have tried your suggestions. Changed the mix in general
     There were 2 guitar tracks, one straight strum and the other fingerpicked with alternating bass lines. I brought the alternating bass forward. I also backed off the verb on vox.
    Does sound better to me.
    New version on Soundclick now.
    http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?q=hi&songID=10563835
    Thanks,
    Bob

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    Re:She Reeled Me In 2011/04/28 16:31:27 (permalink)
    I like this song! Great feel. Like Rick said less reverb on vocal and brightness to the guitar. Don't be afraid of bringing the vocals out front. Thanks for posting your song.

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