My Favorite Track I've Made All Year!

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2011/05/10 16:31:14 (permalink)

My Favorite Track I've Made All Year!

hi everyone!

I've been building up my ReverbNation profile alot since the last time I posted a link to it last year. I'm now starting to post a track every Monday, just to keep it going, but this week's track, "The New World," I think is definitely my best yet. Would love to hear some opinions/comments.

http://www.reverbnation.com/davidrosen

Enjoy!

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David Rosen

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    Re:My Favorite Track I've Made All Year! 2011/05/11 14:41:12 (permalink)
    Awesome!  There is one melody line.  Maybe add some variations?

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    Re:My Favorite Track I've Made All Year! 2011/05/11 14:46:27 (permalink)
    thanks for the comment. yea i kind of wanted to keep it that way and just have it keep building stronger, but before i really finish it for any kind of release maybe i'll consider more change in the melody.

    on an unrelated note, as of this reply, we will be tied at 319 posts :-)

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    Re:My Favorite Track I've Made All Year! 2011/05/11 17:32:03 (permalink)

    I like the start of this music but the mix between drums and some of the other sounds don't mix in my bag of tricks .
    Too much bass on the drums and I could barely make out some of the other things going on in the music you created .
    Please don't take it like I'm trashing you music I like some of what you created , its the mix that needs some work .
    Also more changes would make the music sound better too , it all sounds like a recycle of the same thing .

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    Re:My Favorite Track I've Made All Year! 2011/05/11 17:47:19 (permalink)
    thanks for the comment.

    no i definitely don't take it as you trashing my music. definitely looking for any and all input. it's definitely a bass heavy track which i think wouldn't be for everyone. it's meant to be very loud and big sounding. obviously with 2 people in a row commenting that it needs some more changes though i think i'll look into that for when i go back to it for my album.

    check out some of the other music while you're there. :-)

    thanks
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    Re:My Favorite Track I've Made All Year! 2011/05/11 18:20:03 (permalink)
    I like it.

    In my opinion, i don't think this needs any more melody. I think the topline riff / melody is fine, if anything I might pull it in at the 4th measure where is goes higher. Also, as a pretty deep & trancy track, I'd aybe think about creating more space within it rather than squeezing in more melody?
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    Re:My Favorite Track I've Made All Year! 2011/05/11 18:36:01 (permalink)
    thanks spark.

    yea that's a good idea too, maybe instead of building more, breaking down more. i kinda have that tiny little 2 bar breakdown in there, but maybe i could allow for some more breakdowns and even extend the length of things building from the beginning... interesting...

    thanks for the comments everyone. any comments on other tracks on there are appreciated too :-)

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